Spirit of the Wilderness

Yearning for the open spaces, 
Longing for endless sky
I seek out the holy places: 
Desert canyon, mountains high,
Where my soul is free to fly.

And I feel a light is glowing
Deep within me like a flame,
Hear a song within me growing,
Hear the spirit call my name
And am happy that I came.

7/18/2017
For contest English Quintain
Sponsored by Janice Canerdy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/6/2018 10:24:00 PM
Delightful, Agnes.
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Date: 8/2/2017 3:01:00 PM
Agnes, this is stunning, congratulations on your win ~*
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/6/2017 10:54:00 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 8/2/2017 10:23:00 AM
Beautiful poem Agnes...Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/6/2017 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 8/2/2017 9:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Agnes!
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Date: 8/2/2017 10:00:00 AM
Thanks, Dale.
Date: 8/2/2017 5:44:00 AM
Saving this one, Agnes! Just lovely! Congrats!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/2/2017 10:00:00 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 8/2/2017 12:38:00 AM
Agnes, CONGRATS on your win. Thanks for entering your great poem in my contest! Janice
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/2/2017 9:59:00 AM
Thank you very much, Janice - I am so glad you liked my poem.
Date: 7/31/2017 7:55:00 PM
This is very, very lovely Agnes. I hope it is a top winner! : )
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Date: 8/2/2017 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Connie.
Date: 7/31/2017 5:49:00 AM
This is true and well expressed, Agnes. There are indeed some places where the spirit is calmed and refreshed, where stresses are eased. // Barry
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/2/2017 9:58:00 AM
Thank you very much, Barry.
Date: 7/28/2017 5:10:00 PM
Lovely write, Agnes! I felt a very spiritual emotion while reading this. Good luck! :)
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Date: 8/2/2017 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Alyssa.
Date: 7/27/2017 8:25:00 PM
Wonderful portrayal of something that you like doing. Mine is not about nature so I hope I can make it seem as good as yours for Sara!!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/2/2017 9:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
Date: 7/25/2017 2:41:00 PM
This is a beautiful and poetical delivery of this delightful form, Agnes. I yearn for such open wilderness, considering that our once beautiful island is quickly losing its natural allure, falling victim to 'progress' and exploiters. Regards // paul
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 7/26/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Paul. I am sorry your beautiful island is being spoiled :(
Date: 7/19/2017 4:52:00 PM
Oh this is awesome Agnes, love the flow, and you sure bring the poem to life, with such exquisite words,
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Date: 7/26/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Harry.
Date: 7/19/2017 9:39:00 AM
A beautiful poem in it's spirituality, Mrs Agnes. Good luck:)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 7/26/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel.
Date: 7/18/2017 6:24:00 PM
I felt a sense of freedom and calm reading your poem Agnes:-) I can picture you on top on one of the mountains you've just climbed surveying the beautiful scenery and writing this lovely poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 7/26/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. I am glad I could convey this feeling through the poem.
Date: 7/18/2017 5:48:00 PM
enjoy them whenever you can for they are quickly disappearing
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 7/26/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thanks, Frederic.
Date: 7/18/2017 5:40:00 PM
Excellent poem Agnes. I really enjoyed this one a lot :) Very freeing. Good luck in the contest!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 7/26/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
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