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Spirit of the Wilderness

Yearning for the open spaces, 
Longing for endless sky
I seek out the holy places: 
Desert canyon, mountains high,
Where my soul is free to fly.

And I feel a light is glowing
Deep within me like a flame,
Hear a song within me growing,
Hear the spirit call my name
And am happy that I came.

7/18/2017
For contest English Quintain
Sponsored by Janice Canerdy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 10:24 PM
Delightful, Agnes.
Roper Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 3:01 PM
Agnes, this is stunning, congratulations on your win ~*
Krampe Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 10:54 PM
Thank you, Eve.
May Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 10:23 AM
Beautiful poem Agnes...Congrats on your win
Krampe Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 10:53 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Cozart Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Congrats on your win, Agnes!
Krampe Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 10:00 AM
Thanks, Dale.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 5:44 AM
Saving this one, Agnes! Just lovely! Congrats!
Krampe Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 10:00 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Canerdy Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 12:38 AM
Agnes, CONGRATS on your win. Thanks for entering your great poem in my contest! Janice
Krampe Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Thank you very much, Janice - I am so glad you liked my poem.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 7:55 PM
This is very, very lovely Agnes. I hope it is a top winner! : )
Krampe Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Thank you, Connie.
Stebbings Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 5:49 AM
This is true and well expressed, Agnes. There are indeed some places where the spirit is calmed and refreshed, where stresses are eased. // Barry
Krampe Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:58 AM
Thank you very much, Barry.
Lorette Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 5:10 PM
Lovely write, Agnes! I felt a very spiritual emotion while reading this. Good luck! :)
Krampe Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Thank you, Alyssa.
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Wonderful portrayal of something that you like doing. Mine is not about nature so I hope I can make it seem as good as yours for Sara!!
Krampe Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:58 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
Callus Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 2:41 PM
This is a beautiful and poetical delivery of this delightful form, Agnes. I yearn for such open wilderness, considering that our once beautiful island is quickly losing its natural allure, falling victim to 'progress' and exploiters. Regards // paul
Krampe Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Thank you, Paul. I am sorry your beautiful island is being spoiled :(
Horsman Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 4:52 PM
Oh this is awesome Agnes, love the flow, and you sure bring the poem to life, with such exquisite words,
Krampe Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thank you, Harry.
Turner Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 9:39 AM
A beautiful poem in it's spirituality, Mrs Agnes. Good luck:)
Krampe Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thank you, Daniel.
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 6:24 PM
I felt a sense of freedom and calm reading your poem Agnes:-) I can picture you on top on one of the mountains you've just climbed surveying the beautiful scenery and writing this lovely poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thank you, Jan. I am glad I could convey this feeling through the poem.
Parker Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 5:48 PM
enjoy them whenever you can for they are quickly disappearing
Krampe Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Thanks, Frederic.
Sands Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Excellent poem Agnes. I really enjoyed this one a lot :) Very freeing. Good luck in the contest!
Krampe Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
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