Sara Kendrick Poet Diminished Hexaverse

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Spirit Fed

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Busy busy day
No time to stop~pray
Internal strong light 
Diminishing out
Candle going now

If only prayed
A few seconds
Feeding candle
Holy Spirit

No prayer 
Candle flame
Now flickers

Small test 
Lights out

Sad

In honor of Paula Swanson's 
contest: "By Candle Light"
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Sheol Moribund September 27, 2011 at 6:00 PM Dear Sara: Like this poem! It seems we only pray when we or someone we care 4 is in trouble or sick. Thank you 4 reading and commenting on my poem. PEACE!!!

Fabiyas M V September 27, 2011 at 12:05 PM Congratulations on your big win, Sara.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 25, 2011 at 5:23 PM Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "By Candle Light" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 24, 2011 at 11:09 PM Congrats Sara on a wonderful win with this vivid vision of the contest theme my friend..luv..

Joe Maverick September 24, 2011 at 1:49 AM I was thinking about praying and then i read this. Off i go then..

M. Hussain Effendi September 23, 2011 at 5:34 AM This is a reminder to those too busy with the world, have forgotten that Who Pulls the Strings. Nice one, madame.

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2011 at 10:00 PM I think I liked this one even better because it focused more on your personal struggle with prayer! good luck in the contest. I saw the nice picture.

Elizabeth Wesley September 22, 2011 at 6:16 PM Enjoyed the depth of this Sara. Your diminished use of words seems to bring the truth of the verse into prominence. So nice my friend!