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Spirit calling

Spirit calling 
We rise we fall
We fall we rise 
Cos all we do is based on nothingness’s 
So for the days yet to come 
We have nothing to gain 
We have nothing to lose 
Yet we have a life to live 
So for the children yet unborn 
Hope they will live to live again 
Cos all we do is base on nothingness’s so 
We rise we fall 
We fall we rise 
So for the life yet to come 
I Hope it found a place of peace 
In a dying world
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November 13, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Hello Richard, what a meditative and profound poem. "We rise we fall / We fall we rise." I think it perfectly captures that existential paradox, the idea that even if our actions are "based on nothingness," we still have that crucial "life to live." I love philosophy and loved reading. Autumn Blessings, Richard, Daniel
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November 13, 2025 at 7:18 AM
Hello Richard, what a meditative and profound poem. "We rise we fall / We fall we rise." I think it perfectly captures that existential paradox, the idea that even if our actions are "based on nothingness," we still have that crucial "life to live." I love philosophy and loved reading. Autumn Blessings, Richard, Daniel
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