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Spirit Adrift

The rapids
of emotions
have flooded
a heart,
drowning her love
into an abyss
of darkness;
all that is left
are the gentle
drifting ripples
of a once,
passionate soul.

©Ana Espinola Collins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 9, 2016 at 2:19 AM
ANA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry,
Vaso Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:15 PM
Me sweet? Someone saying that is sweet! Surely pas moi!
Espinola Collins Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 6:12 AM
:)
Vaso Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Very beautiful, I wish one day to find and meet a gentle drifting soul as you have expressed so well here!!!
Espinola Collins Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 8:00 PM
That's so sweet :))
Kruger Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 6:11 AM
I can relate to this. Well written Ana.
Espinola Collins Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Thanks Neil!
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