Spirit

Patsiliga overflowed, nine inches of rain so I'm told Those wonderful showers coming down Filling the ponds and all around Needing rainfall everyday So the creeks and other tributaries Is a reservoir for the spirit

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/22/2009 5:01:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Sara. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 9/22/2009 4:02:00 AM

Nice poem Sara>>James

Jared Pickett

Date: 9/21/2009 6:01:00 PM

Such a fabulous writer Sara...... Keep it up.....:JP]

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/21/2009 5:10:00 PM

Right Sara... I Was Thinking of the Word Pastiglia... See I Learned Something Interesting Today... Nice Write... Oh, and I later found your other poem with the Title (explains Everything ) Thanks MoonBee

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/21/2009 4:42:00 PM

Your words flow like water! Well done! Laura :)

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/21/2009 3:58:00 PM

Patsiligia, Sara, is that some sort of Italian Plaster/Clay... Anyway... loved the flow (no pun intended) of this poem and its content.. MoonBee