Spiraling Universe

May your gift expand like our spiraling universe
Being placed on paper, internet, or in  the sand
Flung out amongst the stars to shine brightly
Touching on the heart and lives of many

When your cup has overflowed into the sauce
Of plenty may it flow onto the print and touch
On the lives of many
May your journey continue like the stars

Filled with blessings near and far
May your sauna be warm and moist
To relax the tension and inspiration thrust
May your days be filled with love

And your nights pieced with relaxing dreams
Until your quilt is fully finished and you
Sleep the sleep of the kings
Then your journey to other stars be fast

And very productive where you rule,
Reign, and kingdoms build that are magnificent
And splendid
Where all is joy, peace, and love forever in it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mills Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 2:12 PM
A fervent masterpeice! Love, Susan
Chachere Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 6:02 PM
i like this a lot, Sara. its a great masterpiece from you, did you use all of your soul on this one? because i see your name in the light of those stars. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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June 23, 2010 at 11:12 PM
Dear Marie, this makes me especially blesses to know you. because your words are words of one inspired by God. or shall i say the thing that God is looking for when He's looking for life in something made of clay. you must have moved Him or He moved you in the creation of this piece. for it has moved me deeply and let in inspiration where it was lost. your soul spoke to mine and i read my God more clearly. your's John Henry Loving III
Austin Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 2:04 PM
Great write, Sara. All humankind needs to keep this vision on their inner screen. Love, daver
Spence Sr Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Ah, this is very refreshing. It's like being in paradise. The lines are relaxing and bring peace to the mind. Great job! Joseph
Culverhouse Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 7:36 AM
Very nice poem, I was trying to write one like this except a limerick. you stated it well.
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 3:38 AM
I nice passionate poem
Galua Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 3:13 AM
wow...this passionate write makes me speechless...i love how your passion extend your imagination...great write...^_^ v
Horsman Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 2:08 AM
i really like this sara, harry
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