Spiraling Down Into the Garden Dismembered Paratroop Jumper

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Plummeting down rascally Falls Cowering tumbling forward swirls Down falling down falling down Powering Crescent trapped in the spiral graphic flaws Falling plummeting down falling Falling to the ground I am forward bound Caution yet read By the following cut sounds Sounds of the sparring Robins Twittering sparrows chirps He's fallen He's fallen and he can't get up All Fall Down I to the beckoning Earth While in the garden rabbits eat the raw Cabbage Squirrels eat nibble scribble fluorescent Greenery treats Why eat nuts Something funny about this paratrooper Aspiring meaning falling down into primatene space What?? Heading toward the Earth Plummeting down Falling Towards the hard ground Plummeting down spiraling spinning out of control Hollering struggling tumbling spinning he falls What matters does matter as he decides to releases parachute Don't be so disheartened Halo coming Lying amongst the rabbits and squirrel in the garden Is the aspiring falling dismembered parachute jumper 9/15/19 written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2019©

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