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Spiral Galaxy

spiral galaxy
chasm of infinity
black holes bridge the gap



For the contest:  Haiku Beyond
Sponsored by Rick Parise

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Eiken Laan

March 29, 2011 at 10:50 AM

Paula, lovely haiku, well done on your win:))

Kash Poet

March 29, 2011 at 9:35 AM

Wonderful Haiku!Congrats Paula on your win---kashinath

Carrie Richards

March 28, 2011 at 1:08 PM

Chasm of infinity.....what a perfect line that is!! Congratulations on this wonderful haiku!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 28, 2011 at 12:49 PM

Congratulations on 15th place win in the contest of Rick, Paula

Carolyn Devonshire

March 28, 2011 at 12:49 PM

Paula, Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

March 28, 2011 at 12:30 PM

Good to see your poem in the winner's circle Paula. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success in Rick's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 28, 2011 at 12:07 PM

Congrats Paula on your wonderful win in Rick's cool contest with these vibrant words depicting the photo presented my friend.. enjoy your win with luv... hope all is well ...

Sidney Beck

March 28, 2011 at 9:10 AM

honestly, haiku poetry is largely incomprehensible to me, but there are exceptions and yours is one.......it makes sense to me and I like it....I feel it deserved to be placed much much higher....best wishes...sincerely ..Syd

Nette Onclaud

March 28, 2011 at 7:56 AM

special cheers fro a unique write, paula.. :) huggs

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 28, 2011 at 7:54 AM

Congratulations Paula on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Haiku Beyond". Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 24, 2011 at 6:47 AM

I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Paula the best to you in the contest. Love, Carol