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Spiral Galaxy

spiral galaxy chasm of infinity black holes bridge the gap For the contest: Haiku Beyond Sponsored by Rick Parise

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Eiken Laan

Date: 3/29/2011 10:50:00 AM

Paula, lovely haiku, well done on your win:))

Kash Poet

Date: 3/29/2011 9:35:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku!Congrats Paula on your win---kashinath

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/28/2011 1:08:00 PM

Chasm of infinity.....what a perfect line that is!! Congratulations on this wonderful haiku!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2011 12:49:00 PM

Paula, Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/28/2011 12:49:00 PM

Congratulations on 15th place win in the contest of Rick, Paula

John Freeman

Date: 3/28/2011 12:30:00 PM

Good to see your poem in the winner's circle Paula. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success in Rick's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2011 12:07:00 PM

Congrats Paula on your wonderful win in Rick's cool contest with these vibrant words depicting the photo presented my friend.. enjoy your win with luv... hope all is well ...

Sidney Beck

Date: 3/28/2011 9:10:00 AM

honestly, haiku poetry is largely incomprehensible to me, but there are exceptions and yours is one.......it makes sense to me and I like it....I feel it deserved to be placed much much higher....best wishes...sincerely ..Syd

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/28/2011 7:56:00 AM

special cheers fro a unique write, paula.. :) huggs

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2011 7:54:00 AM

Congratulations Paula on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Haiku Beyond". Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/24/2011 6:47:00 AM

I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Paula the best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2011 2:35:00 PM

wow, chasm of infinity and then a black hole to bridge the gap. THis rocks!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2011 11:35:00 AM

Excellent poem, Paula. Really like to concept of a "chasm of infinity." Wishin you success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn