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Spinning World

Tonight, the big bright hanging moon is smiling
My spinning world is singing, lovingly accepting your ring

©Donna Jones

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Mustapha Mohammed

August 1, 2013 at 1:45 PM

With a tone like this who could doubt the winner.

Shadow Hamilton

June 18, 2013 at 8:35 AM

superb congrats on win Shadow x smiles

Donna Jones

June 18, 2013 at 10:11 PM

Thanks for stoppind..means a lot...

Lucilla Carrillo

June 17, 2013 at 8:11 AM

This is very good and Congrts. on your win..... Lucilla

Donna Jones

June 18, 2013 at 10:10 PM

Well...no win...but thanks Lucilla...I feel like a winner cause my friends liked it!

Andrea Dietrich

June 16, 2013 at 11:41 AM

Hey, I thought I had seen all the winners by now but I don't see my congratulations down here, so I'm telling you now: WELL DONE!!! and congrats my friend.

Donna Jones

June 16, 2013 at 3:34 PM

Well...thanks...but I didn't win....:-) :-) or even place!!!!!...but glad you liked it...that is ALL that matters..

Joseph May

June 16, 2013 at 7:59 AM

congrats on your win Donna

Donna Jones

June 16, 2013 at 3:35 PM

Well Joseph ...nice thought ...but mine wasn't good enough to place....maybe next time

Ravi Sathasivam

June 15, 2013 at 11:33 PM

Excellent. Very romantic write. Tfs

Donna Jones

June 16, 2013 at 3:37 PM

Thank you so much..

Richard Lamoureux

June 15, 2013 at 7:59 AM

Good Morning and I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.

Donna Jones

June 16, 2013 at 3:39 PM

Hey Richard....canning green beans...35 pints I think it was...and spending time with dad....awesome...peanut butter fudge!!!!!

Jack Ellison

June 13, 2013 at 2:33 PM

Oh so sweet dear Donna!!! A true romantic you are... big big hugs... Jake xoxox

Donna Jones

June 16, 2013 at 3:40 PM

Awwww....thanks..:-)

Poet Tacito

June 13, 2013 at 9:57 AM

How beautiful!!!!!! What a capture of a memorable moment!

Donna Jones

June 16, 2013 at 3:41 PM

Thanks Drake....much appreciated

Eileen Manassian

June 13, 2013 at 6:56 AM

Romantically sweet and precious! :) Good luck on this lovely write, MD! I'm sure you will do well! You're a winner in my book! HUGS!!!!

Donna Jones

June 16, 2013 at 3:42 PM

If my friends liked it...that is what counts....thanks

Kirin Lawrence

June 13, 2013 at 2:11 AM

My brain connected your lovely write to these lyrics from the Police "Walking back from your house, walking on the moon."

Donna Jones

June 18, 2013 at 10:12 PM

Its how I felt! Hey thanks!

Richard D Seal

June 12, 2013 at 6:04 PM

This is lovely Donna, the kind of memory worth hanging on to. Good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard

Donna Jones

June 18, 2013 at 10:14 PM

Well, no bananas' but fun to rite...thanks Richard

Carrie Richards

June 12, 2013 at 2:26 PM

Lovely and romantic!!! made me smile! :)

Donna Jones

June 18, 2013 at 10:09 PM

Oh thanks Carrie...

Richard Lamoureux

June 12, 2013 at 7:06 AM

Dropping by to say good morning Donna, hugs Rick.

Richard Lamoureux

June 12, 2013 at 6:59 PM

Yes tha is wonderful.

Donna Jones

June 12, 2013 at 7:14 AM

Good morning..have a great one!!...at first I made a typo and the computer changed it to God's morning...isn't that wonderful! :-)

Tim Ryerson

June 11, 2013 at 6:06 PM

So much said in these two beautiful lines, Donna...I can feel your joy coming through...Reads like a winner! - Tim

Donna Jones

June 11, 2013 at 9:14 PM

Oh thanks Tim....it was a good night...:-)

Richard Lamoureux

June 11, 2013 at 7:47 AM

How romantic, I think this is a definate winner. Amazing how much can be conveyed in just two lines.

Richard Lamoureux

June 12, 2013 at 7:05 AM

You are kind.

Donna Jones

June 11, 2013 at 9:16 PM

Thanks richard, but I don't think it touches your worn out shoes!!!! That was awesome!!!!

Sara Kendrick

June 10, 2013 at 12:42 PM

Ahh!! So romantic..Enjoyed reading your great rhyming couplets..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Donna Jones

June 11, 2013 at 9:26 PM

Thanks so much Sara...glad you are back

Shadow Hamilton

June 10, 2013 at 7:59 AM

so loving simple and beautiful gl in contest

Donna Jones

June 11, 2013 at 9:27 PM

Thank you friend..

Painted Hunter

June 10, 2013 at 6:06 AM

Great entry for this one , Donna. Engagement or promise ring?...;)

Donna Jones

June 10, 2013 at 7:21 AM

Well not better just different!!!!!

Donna Jones

June 10, 2013 at 7:20 AM

Promise ring...things never get better than prom nite..right?????

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 9, 2013 at 2:22 PM

-You are proficient, Donna! - Luck in contest!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

June 9, 2013 at 8:11 PM

Thank you....not nearly as good as so many...just trying to join in....but thanks!!!

Jack Jordan

June 9, 2013 at 1:21 PM

You're saying a lot in very few words here. Good luck in the contest... Jack

Donna Jones

June 9, 2013 at 8:12 PM

Ah thanks Jack......very nice...

Russell Sivey

June 9, 2013 at 11:23 AM

Would that be a diamond ring directly from the man in the moon? I really loved reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What a tremendous piece, such a wonderful poem, Great Work!!

Donna Jones

June 9, 2013 at 8:14 PM

Well I believe it was a diamond chip!!! A memory from a long time ago!!!!! :-) :-)

Poet Destroyer A

June 9, 2013 at 10:58 AM

wow...i'm almost dizzy... JK... how many karats ... a sweet couplets... I DO... love it... :-) Linda

Donna Jones

June 9, 2013 at 8:17 PM

Hey beautiful.....wrote this from a way back memory of a boy giving me a promise ring...are you old enough to remember those???? Just a chip I think but I thought it was the prettiest ring I'd ever seen...and the night was perfect!