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Spinning World

Tonight, the big bright hanging moon is smiling My spinning world is singing, lovingly accepting your ring ©Donna Jones

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/1/2013 1:45:00 PM

With a tone like this who could doubt the winner.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/18/2013 8:35:00 AM

superb congrats on win Shadow x smiles

Donna Jones
Date: 6/18/2013 10:11:00 PM

Thanks for stoppind..means a lot...

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/17/2013 8:11:00 AM

This is very good and Congrts. on your win..... Lucilla

Donna Jones
Date: 6/18/2013 10:10:00 PM

Well...no win...but thanks Lucilla...I feel like a winner cause my friends liked it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2013 11:41:00 AM

Hey, I thought I had seen all the winners by now but I don't see my congratulations down here, so I'm telling you now: WELL DONE!!! and congrats my friend.

Donna Jones
Date: 6/16/2013 3:34:00 PM

Well...thanks...but I didn't win....:-) :-) or even place!!!!!...but glad you liked it...that is ALL that matters..

Joseph May

Date: 6/16/2013 7:59:00 AM

congrats on your win Donna

Donna Jones
Date: 6/16/2013 3:35:00 PM

Well Joseph ...nice thought ...but mine wasn't good enough to place....maybe next time

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/15/2013 11:33:00 PM

Excellent. Very romantic write. Tfs

Donna Jones
Date: 6/16/2013 3:37:00 PM

Thank you so much..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/15/2013 7:59:00 AM

Good Morning and I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.

Donna Jones
Date: 6/16/2013 3:39:00 PM

Hey Richard....canning green beans...35 pints I think it was...and spending time with dad....awesome...peanut butter fudge!!!!!

Jack Ellison

Date: 6/13/2013 2:33:00 PM

Oh so sweet dear Donna!!! A true romantic you are... big big hugs... Jake xoxox

Donna Jones
Date: 6/16/2013 3:40:00 PM

Awwww....thanks..:-)

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/13/2013 9:57:00 AM

How beautiful!!!!!! What a capture of a memorable moment!

Donna Jones
Date: 6/16/2013 3:41:00 PM

Thanks Drake....much appreciated

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/13/2013 6:56:00 AM

Romantically sweet and precious! :) Good luck on this lovely write, MD! I'm sure you will do well! You're a winner in my book! HUGS!!!!

Donna Jones
Date: 6/16/2013 3:42:00 PM

If my friends liked it...that is what counts....thanks

Kirin Lawrence

Date: 6/13/2013 2:11:00 AM

My brain connected your lovely write to these lyrics from the Police "Walking back from your house, walking on the moon."

Donna Jones
Date: 6/18/2013 10:12:00 PM

Its how I felt! Hey thanks!

Richard D Seal

Date: 6/12/2013 6:04:00 PM

This is lovely Donna, the kind of memory worth hanging on to. Good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard

Donna Jones
Date: 6/18/2013 10:14:00 PM

Well, no bananas' but fun to rite...thanks Richard

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/12/2013 2:26:00 PM

Lovely and romantic!!! made me smile! :)

Donna Jones
Date: 6/18/2013 10:09:00 PM

Oh thanks Carrie...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/12/2013 7:06:00 AM

Dropping by to say good morning Donna, hugs Rick.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2013 6:59:00 PM

Yes tha is wonderful.

Donna Jones
Date: 6/12/2013 7:14:00 AM

Good morning..have a great one!!...at first I made a typo and the computer changed it to God's morning...isn't that wonderful! :-)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/11/2013 6:06:00 PM

So much said in these two beautiful lines, Donna...I can feel your joy coming through...Reads like a winner! - Tim

Donna Jones
Date: 6/11/2013 9:14:00 PM

Oh thanks Tim....it was a good night...:-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/11/2013 7:47:00 AM

How romantic, I think this is a definate winner. Amazing how much can be conveyed in just two lines.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2013 7:05:00 AM

You are kind.

Donna Jones
Date: 6/11/2013 9:16:00 PM

Thanks richard, but I don't think it touches your worn out shoes!!!! That was awesome!!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/10/2013 12:42:00 PM

Ahh!! So romantic..Enjoyed reading your great rhyming couplets..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Donna Jones
Date: 6/11/2013 9:26:00 PM

Thanks so much Sara...glad you are back

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/10/2013 7:59:00 AM

so loving simple and beautiful gl in contest

Donna Jones
Date: 6/11/2013 9:27:00 PM

Thank you friend..

Painted Hunter

Date: 6/10/2013 6:06:00 AM

Great entry for this one , Donna. Engagement or promise ring?...;)

Donna Jones
Date: 6/10/2013 7:21:00 AM

Well not better just different!!!!!

Donna Jones
Date: 6/10/2013 7:20:00 AM

Promise ring...things never get better than prom nite..right?????

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/9/2013 2:22:00 PM

-You are proficient, Donna! - Luck in contest!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones
Date: 6/9/2013 8:11:00 PM

Thank you....not nearly as good as so many...just trying to join in....but thanks!!!

Jack Jordan

Date: 6/9/2013 1:21:00 PM

You're saying a lot in very few words here. Good luck in the contest... Jack

Donna Jones
Date: 6/9/2013 8:12:00 PM

Ah thanks Jack......very nice...

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/9/2013 11:23:00 AM

Would that be a diamond ring directly from the man in the moon? I really loved reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What a tremendous piece, such a wonderful poem, Great Work!!

Donna Jones
Date: 6/9/2013 8:14:00 PM

Well I believe it was a diamond chip!!! A memory from a long time ago!!!!! :-) :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 10:58:00 AM

wow...i'm almost dizzy... JK... how many karats ... a sweet couplets... I DO... love it... :-) Linda

Donna Jones
Date: 6/9/2013 8:17:00 PM

Hey beautiful.....wrote this from a way back memory of a boy giving me a promise ring...are you old enough to remember those???? Just a chip I think but I thought it was the prettiest ring I'd ever seen...and the night was perfect!

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/9/2013 9:09:00 AM

A night worth remembering!! So romantic and lovely !! Good luck!!

Donna Jones
Date: 6/9/2013 8:19:00 PM

Thanks Carrie...:-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/9/2013 9:06:00 AM

how romantic!.. i like the way this ended with a surprise.. greaat stuff!..:) hugggs

Donna Jones
Date: 6/9/2013 8:20:00 PM

Hey nice to see ya nette ...thanks...