Spinning Round In Passage

Spying on occupants of interplanetary Earth,
All hands aboard, their watching us now,
And have been since the planets very disrupting birth.

Moving closely now and hide being their sun,
Catching how we hold away their gun,
And study how it circles around every thing,
About it and how it works.
 
Wide open now we're nearly done,
I just want to show them the quirks,
Stuff we have done and how we've been having fun,
Scooting round our dirt, Finding out the sum,
So we can see past our sun I want to show them the perks.

Like how we hold them closer now but can see clearly past,
where they have traveled and really how hard they have worked. 
We see clearly now and no one understands how but now we see how Their system lurks and their almost past us now, thats really fast,
How they travel I can't believe we've intertwined and I am grieving down, 
Because I don't know how but we've watched them now,
And they go on by, I guess our planet Earth succeeds us now,
And it's as if God has put us formerly to work.
 
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 3:21 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Courtney Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 7:56 PM
thank you Sara, will be watching for you.
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:18 PM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Cyndi's "Great Soup Release" contest Ruth. Love, Carol
Courtney Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 7:57 PM
thank you Carol
Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Ruth, congrats on your win..David
Courtney Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 7:57 PM
thanks rc
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Wonderfully written poetry Ruth. Thank you for sharing. Have a super weekend. Love, Carol
Courtney Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 7:57 PM
we had tornadoes and storms all weekend hope yours was better
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