Spinning Out of Control In the Desert

Saved from the fire's lips
by the sound from their own,
like a lonely jellyfish,
alone and never to sting.
All water, no form,
pointless.
I'll take care of the past
and keep looking for that future.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 24, 2011 at 4:41 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jennifer
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May 23, 2011 at 4:37 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jennifer. Love, Carol
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May 22, 2011 at 8:03 PM
Congrats Jennifer on your featured poem this week on P.S. great piece to share with us all with luv..
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