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Spinning Around

Unfolding our hands, we are revolving around own axis On the grass, not on the concrete! Shouting the most clever kids Loosing the ground under feet Only clouds can stop us, That we are not thrown into Space Hard to lift ten kilos boulder never ever existed The same like someone nausea Now I know how it is, playing around of being drunk Almost like an adult to lie on the grass With throbbing heart Happy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/17/2024 8:21:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/18/2016 12:56:00 PM
RICH, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/6/2015 1:03:00 PM
Rich, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 2/22/2015 11:26:00 PM
Lol, so its about being drunk. The whole time I thought it was about little kids playing.
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