Spinning a Warrior Soul

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Spinning a Warrior`s Soul In the long journey of life, we embrace Our path may be laid with thickets and thorns, Some may plant nails along to halt our pace Others may hold our high headway in scorn, Let`s not dread, but stay steadfast on our goal; Some may try to rock the hull of our boat Others to take the wind out of our sail Some may wish to steal the shine of our coat Others may seek from our path to derail, Let`s not fear but brace our will as a whole; Some may try to stab us behind our back Some may try to steal the shine of our seat Some may wish to deal us a severe smack Without any speck of shame of their feat, Let us not shrink but spin a warrior`s soul.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 5/10/2025 8:30:00 AM

Congratulations on winning the contest with your poetry that expresses persistence and resolve in the face of hardship. It underlines the significance of being persistent and fearless when faced with obstacles and hostility from others.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/10/2025 8:52:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear poet for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. These mean so much to me. Wish you a pleasant weekend.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/5/2025 1:03:00 PM

Such an uplifting and encouraging poem this is dear krishanand, i felt this, and i especially love " Let`s not dread, but stay steadfast on our goal;" yes a much needed reminder, "Some may try to stab us behind our back" so many! So true! "Let us not shrink but spin a warrior`s soul. " absolutely! And i must try, doin that too! Thank you for sharing this heartfelt and soulful poem! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/6/2025 7:52:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear poetess for your inspiring words and your kind wishes. These have sent my soul soaring to the sky. Sending you the blessings of light.