Krishnanand Guptar Poet Rhyme

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Spinning a Warrior Soul

                                      Spinning a Warrior`s Soul

                             In the long journey of life, we embrace
                       Our path may be laid with thickets and thorns,
                        Some may plant nails along to halt our pace  
                         Others may hold our high headway in scorn,
                      Let`s not dread, but stay steadfast on our goal;


                           Some may try to rock the hull of our boat
                              Others to take the wind out of our sail
                         Some may wish to steal the shine of our coat
                             Others may seek from our path to derail, 
                          Let`s not fear but brace our will as a whole;


                           Some may try to stab us behind our back
                          Some may try to steal the shine of our seat
                            Some may wish to deal us a severe smack
                             Without any speck of shame of their feat,
                            Let us not shrink but spin a warrior`s soul.

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Sotto Poet May 10, 2025 at 8:30 AM Congratulations on winning the contest with your poetry that expresses persistence and resolve in the face of hardship. It underlines the significance of being persistent and fearless when faced with obstacles and hostility from others. Krishnanand Guptar May 10, 2025 at 8:52 AM Thanks a lot dear poet for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. These mean so much to me. Wish you a pleasant weekend.

Ink Empress May 5, 2025 at 1:03 PM Such an uplifting and encouraging poem this is dear krishanand, i felt this, and i especially love " Let`s not dread, but stay steadfast on our goal;" yes a much needed reminder, "Some may try to stab us behind our back" so many! So true! "Let us not shrink but spin a warrior`s soul. " absolutely! And i must try, doin that too! Thank you for sharing this heartfelt and soulful poem! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always Krishnanand Guptar May 6, 2025 at 7:52 AM Thanks a lot dear poetess for your inspiring words and your kind wishes. These have sent my soul soaring to the sky. Sending you the blessings of light.