Spinning a Poem
This poem…
pome
poam
pwoem
poeum
ahhhhm....poem trips over its own name and grins about it
Ideas collide all at once…wings everywhere
Order snaps into place then shatters before cohesiveness
I chase one line…lose three and then find a better one by accident
Chaos keeps the beat while structure pretends it planned this
In the end the mess bows…organized enough to call itself done
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