Spinning a Poem

This poem…
pome 
poam
pwoem 
poeum 
ahhhhm....poem trips over its own name and grins about it

Ideas collide all at once…wings everywhere
Order snaps into place then shatters before cohesiveness
I chase one line…lose three and then find a better one by accident
Chaos keeps the beat while structure pretends it planned this
In the end the mess bows…organized enough to call itself done
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 12:04 PM
clever and funny. Liked it!
Delegans Avatar
January 5, 2026 at 10:11 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Daniels Avatar
January 1, 2026 at 4:28 PM
Ha ha Ha ! This is more or less how it works. So hilarious this business of writing poetry. Can become obsessive. Light your way.
Delegans Avatar
January 3, 2026 at 9:51 AM
It's never an organized process lol. Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed, Ghairo.
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