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A raven, so craven; a bit like a raisen. Once sweet, now sour with no source of power. He stumbles and grumbles; puking his guts. Oh man what a drunk... I better get home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/16/2023 2:01:00 PM
Creative, clever, humorous. A winner! Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 3/10/2016 1:16:00 PM
Ha, on the spinning... enjoyed. linda
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Date: 3/17/2015 12:08:00 AM
Woah a super poem with fine imaginative muse summed up in brevity. Thumbs up poet. Nice to read u again.
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Date: 2/25/2015 4:58:00 PM
That sums it up!
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Date: 1/12/2015 10:37:00 PM
heyyy very nice! lighthearted and lyrical.
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Date: 9/4/2014 2:05:00 AM
Nice write Michael. Made me smile and laugh... Verlena
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Date: 9/3/2014 11:27:00 PM
great description in this short poem - I love the final 2 lines! Hugs jan xx
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