Spinning

spinning
twirling
round and round
make me dizzy
steal away my screams
take the pain
give me laughter
stop the memories
over and over they pour
begging
wishing for release
let me go
give it back
that time
that pure innocence
he gave me so much
changed me greatly
the world goes on
spinning
twirling
round and round
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 12:52 PM
I got dizzy!
Culverhouse Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 4:06 AM
very deep, well written, welcome to poetry soup, hope you have an ever flowing pen, and the inspiration to match.
Bagnall Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 3:56 AM
Interesting poem - Thanks for sharing
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