Spindled Mettle

Spindled Mettle
 
Hour upon hour she sits thoughtfully absorbed
spinning attentively conception’s fibers 
while creating new textures within her mind…

As grain, by grain of living sand, erodes the weaves
exposing gently or tearing the woven seams…
following the hourglass count to maturing age

Set aside are the frivolous dolls of youthful cloths
as situations lead to realities bolder textiles…
some strands chosen, others forced upon life’s spindle  

Her mettle*, though moved by spindled occurrences,
is worn quietly with the era of wisdoms’ mantle
as intertwined events live within her fabric structure


Written by:  Debra Squyres 2/19/13
For: “Objectify Me”


*mettle: spirited determination, mental and emotional character unique to an individual person
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 12:38 PM
DEBRA, this is a nice winning poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) always~ PD
May Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 8:49 PM
congrats on your win Debra
Widjanarko Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 7:55 PM
Lovely master piece Debra :D congrats on your winning too :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, Yanny
Martin Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 4:48 PM
Debra, fabulous work. Such a unique and well crafted piece. Congratulations! -Jeremy
Harper Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 2:47 PM
Debra, thanks much! Congratulations in return, you have a lovely way with words and create a well woven poem about choices and creations. Enjoyed it. P.s. Nice to meet you.
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 6:48 AM
Debra I loved it. Nicely done. Congratulation on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Beaufort Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 3:44 PM
Well done. I could not write something as beautifully done as this. You have intertwined the pieces as if so easily. Wisdom is not a cheap commodity.
Johnson Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 3:13 PM
Your quite the mettlesome maiden these days Debra. :) I know that that could be construed negatively. NOT! More so, it speaks to how prolific you've been lately. So glad. Peace. :)
Sivey Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 7:59 PM
This is a dynamic and wonderful write my friend! I loved reading this simply amazing poem this evening! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
Loving Iii Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 6:50 PM
putting away childish things to replace them with sins and then replace the sins with morals.
Squyres Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 8:38 PM
hmmmm interesting that you found that within these verses?? hmmmm
Merryman Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 4:36 PM
This is really good, Debra! I love the imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
Jordan Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 4:31 PM
A very nice way to capture the sense of old age. Nice work. J
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