Spindle

Spiritually it spun me around in circles
Peering deep within my soul, it encircles
Indigo colored waves of the spectrum
Needlessly filtered out of introspection
Down into the rabbit hole of realization
Leery of the truth and capitalization of
Ending it too early 

So I didn't and I kept spinning on this spindle
Orchestrated to end it on a higher note
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 12, 2012 at 8:35 PM
Tim, congratulations on having your poem featured this week ;-) always,..pd.
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January 12, 2012 at 2:32 AM
I love this!
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January 11, 2012 at 12:33 PM
A real "gem" of fine poetry. Awesome and breathtaking! Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your featured poem of the week.
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January 9, 2012 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations on the week`s win Tim!! :) oxox love Anne-Lise
Brown Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tim. I wish you the best in 2012 with your writing. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations Tim on your win in Brian Strand's "Five To 14" contest. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 3:57 PM
LCongratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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June 29, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Congrats Tim on your super win in the contest with this lovely poetry.. terrific..luv..
B Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 3:13 PM
Thank you. Honestly this one came out of nowhere, just flowed out the other day when I was sitting in front of the computer. I love writing acrostic poetry and I'm glad everyone enjoyed it :).
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 4:01 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Tim. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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