Spin

The world went round
day met night, night met day
revolving door

naturefree verse

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May 23, 2011 at 12:44 PM

Interesting thoughts to ponder about--so much truth in your words. Thank you for the kind words on my book. Your support is greatly appreciated. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

May 7, 2011 at 1:18 PM

Brilliant analogy, Phyllis, and there's no way this cycle will ever be broken. I hadn't seen you here for a while, but am glad you are posting again. Have a wonderful Mother's Day! Love, Carolyn

Anne Rutherford

May 6, 2011 at 5:56 AM

Phyllis very clever and so right with this haiku. Good one. .. We also have lived on the same ave. for 40 years and have the greatest people arounds us , ready to help me when ever I need it now that my husband is so sick. Anne

Sara Kendrick

April 28, 2011 at 10:14 AM

Great one that is filled with emotion...Enjoyed reading your very creative work this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my blog..So many have died and so many families are touched..Many have lost all with their homes gone and some their businesses..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

April 26, 2011 at 3:31 PM

I like this one A LOT, Phyllis. I am glad I came back and saw that the website here is back on, but probably it will go off again. So glad to see a new one of yours here! Luv, andrea