Spilling Dimensions

A sad farewell of beauty
 eaten away through lime
  scattered rains from yesterday 
   eroded the skin of time

   A split to part dimension
  sucking through this space 
 beauty isn’t an illusion
but essence of lasting grace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 8, 2009 at 8:37 PM
This is fabulous, great title...Sabrina
Brown Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 7:54 AM
I am so happy to have the time to read your excellent poetry this beautiful Saturday morning Jayne. Keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
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