Spike

Spike is my name as I stretch and yawn on this beautiful sunny morn
Poking my nose through leaves and debris I sniff the sweet Spring air
Inside my den I hibernate through winter’s cold away from harm
Kaleidoscopes of colour and warmth permeate my prickly skin
Enough of sleep I need to eat ~  hear my tum rumble as out I tumble


Written: 28th March 2019

Contest: Writing Challenge 
Sponsor: Dear Heart
5th place

Contest A BRIAN STRAND SHORTIE
Sponsor Brian Strand 
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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 2:42 PM
This is so sweet and engaging Ann. A delightful view of spring thaw seen through the eyes of a little hedgehog. This would have rated much higher for me. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
Gilmour Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 3:30 PM
Wow, that is such a compliment Connie and thank you so much for your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
La France Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 1:01 PM
Ann, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fun acrostic ~
Gilmour Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 1:54 PM
Thank you Constance for my placement in your contest. I always enjoy the challenges you set and I thank you for taking the time to sponsor and judge them. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 4:35 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Ann :) -hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gilmour Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 5:24 AM
Bless you Anne-Lise for your congrats and hugs! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 10:15 PM
I am enjoying your hedgehog poem so much! I had a boss who gave me a stuffed hedgehog for Counselor's Week, and told me how much she appreciated me. I have given away many stuffed animals, but not this one. This is a happy, uplifting, fun-filled poem, Ann!
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March 31, 2019 at 2:27 AM
Many thanks Caren, so glad you liked it, I really enjoyed writing it! Hedgehogs are such adorable little creatures and it was fun to become one, if only in my poem... Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 4:21 AM
- A lovely poem, Ann ... read with a smile on my mouth :) - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gilmour Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 4:24 AM
Thank you dear Anne-Lise, so happy to have put that smile on your mouth! Have a fun weekend too... kindest thoughts Ann xx
Sands Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 9:50 AM
I enjoyed this sweet poem Ann. Well done :)
Gilmour Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 1:30 AM
Oh thanks so much Heidi, I do love hedgehogs, they are such comical little creatures, I just could not resist this little bit of nonsense, haha... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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