Spike

Spike is my name as I stretch and yawn on this beautiful sunny morn
Poking my nose through leaves and debris I sniff the sweet Spring air
Inside my den I hibernate through winter’s cold away from harm
Kaleidoscopes of colour and warmth permeate my prickly skin
Enough of sleep I need to eat ~  hear my tum rumble as out I tumble


Written: 28th March 2019

Contest: Writing Challenge 
Sponsor: Dear Heart
5th place

Contest A BRIAN STRAND SHORTIE
Sponsor Brian Strand 
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/6/2019 2:42:00 PM
This is so sweet and engaging Ann. A delightful view of spring thaw seen through the eyes of a little hedgehog. This would have rated much higher for me. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/6/2019 3:30:00 PM
Wow, that is such a compliment Connie and thank you so much for your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/3/2019 1:01:00 PM
Ann, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fun acrostic ~
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/3/2019 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Constance for my placement in your contest. I always enjoy the challenges you set and I thank you for taking the time to sponsor and judge them. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/3/2019 4:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Ann :) -hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/3/2019 5:24:00 AM
Bless you Anne-Lise for your congrats and hugs! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/30/2019 10:15:00 PM
I am enjoying your hedgehog poem so much! I had a boss who gave me a stuffed hedgehog for Counselor's Week, and told me how much she appreciated me. I have given away many stuffed animals, but not this one. This is a happy, uplifting, fun-filled poem, Ann!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/31/2019 2:27:00 AM
Many thanks Caren, so glad you liked it, I really enjoyed writing it! Hedgehogs are such adorable little creatures and it was fun to become one, if only in my poem... Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/29/2019 4:21:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Ann ... read with a smile on my mouth :) - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/29/2019 4:24:00 AM
Thank you dear Anne-Lise, so happy to have put that smile on your mouth! Have a fun weekend too... kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/28/2019 9:50:00 AM
I enjoyed this sweet poem Ann. Well done :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/29/2019 1:30:00 AM
Oh thanks so much Heidi, I do love hedgehogs, they are such comical little creatures, I just could not resist this little bit of nonsense, haha... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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