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...Spiders of Color

spiders of color
exploding in jet-black sky...
fingers reach and fall

naturehaiku

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Diiamond Rich

July 13, 2010 at 6:59 AM

A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

July 11, 2010 at 11:00 AM

Congrats on being featured this week. Rhonda Hero

Sara Kendrick

July 11, 2010 at 9:48 AM

Great write that deserves to be front page feature..Congratulations..Sara

Doris Culverhouse

July 7, 2010 at 8:45 AM

congrats on the feature poem and enjoyed reading your work!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 6, 2010 at 8:19 AM

Congratulations Steven on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 6, 2010 at 3:57 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Steven. May you have many more features. Love,Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 6, 2010 at 1:05 AM

I missed reading this before but wow-- this is really amazing--loved that first line of yours! --congrats on you win, Steven ^_^ --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 5, 2010 at 1:31 PM

OOOH LA LA. Great haiku. Congratulations.

Adeleke Adeite

July 5, 2010 at 12:03 PM

Congrats Steve, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! Keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke

Elaine George

July 5, 2010 at 8:44 AM

Incredible descrption of wireworks, Steven. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Lainie

Francine Roberts

July 4, 2010 at 9:22 PM

congrats on having this wonderful poem featured this week and your contest win, I really enjoyed this one.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 4, 2010 at 6:24 PM

Congrats Steven on your winning Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this remarkable write to celebrate freedom day .. enjoy your win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Haiaii.. Al0hA..