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...Spiders of Color

spiders of color exploding in jet-black sky... fingers reach and fall

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Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/13/2010 6:59:00 AM

A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

Date: 7/11/2010 11:00:00 AM

Congrats on being featured this week. Rhonda Hero

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2010 9:48:00 AM

Great write that deserves to be front page feature..Congratulations..Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/7/2010 8:45:00 AM

congrats on the feature poem and enjoyed reading your work!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 8:19:00 AM

Congratulations Steven on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 3:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Steven. May you have many more features. Love,Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/6/2010 1:05:00 AM

I missed reading this before but wow-- this is really amazing--loved that first line of yours! --congrats on you win, Steven ^_^ --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2010 1:31:00 PM

OOOH LA LA. Great haiku. Congratulations.

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/5/2010 12:03:00 PM

Congrats Steve, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! Keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2010 8:44:00 AM

Incredible descrption of wireworks, Steven. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Lainie

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/4/2010 9:22:00 PM

congrats on having this wonderful poem featured this week and your contest win, I really enjoyed this one.

Date: 7/4/2010 7:17:00 PM

Another honor for this poem today. Wow! Congratulations on having your poem featured. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 6:24:00 PM

Congrats Steven on your winning Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this remarkable write to celebrate freedom day .. enjoy your win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Haiaii.. Al0hA..

Date: 7/4/2010 4:14:00 PM

Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Keep on writing. Enjoy your honor! Karen

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/4/2010 11:14:00 AM

Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/3/2010 5:12:00 PM

dear poet friend please just add the ... to the end of line 2? (all else is to form!) Best of luck!

Earle Brown

Date: 7/2/2010 6:00:00 AM

Very Nice. Good luck.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2010 6:43:00 PM

Unique pen picture of the fireworks.Good luck in the contest

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2010 12:30:00 PM

Oh wow I feel slow he he,, I read it like twice, the colorful spiders are fireworks, nice one, clever lol...P.D.