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Spider Web

a long fragile spidery silver threadlike street crossing in nature's G.P.S. like those swinging bridges in gentle wafting breezes temporary avenues to more hospitable environmental habitat
written January 3, 2022

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Date: 1/13/2022 8:26:00 AM
So this is what a fibonacci is! Nice one.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/13/2022 8:45:00 AM
Fun to work with like a word puzzle. Each line has to have the syllable sum of the previous two lines. Interesting, but they can only go about the length of this one. 1-1-2-3-5-8-13-21
Date: 1/12/2022 8:36:00 AM
Like the modern simile to a GPS. By coincidence I also posted a few lines on a spider's web. / Maurice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/12/2022 9:46:00 AM
Hey, Maurice. I was sitting by an indoor pool watching a web drift with the breezes. Thanks. Great minds often run in the same circles. (grinning)
Date: 1/12/2022 8:35:00 AM
I like the modern simile to a GPS. By coincidence I also posted a few lines on a spider's web. / Maurice
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Date: 1/12/2022 6:02:00 AM
nicely written Milton, a surreal snapshot of nature's call
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/12/2022 7:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, John, for your thoughtful comment on my poem.
Date: 1/12/2022 12:51:00 AM
lovely - I sent you soupmail. God bless you, Love, Gina
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/12/2022 7:50:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gina. I responded to your soupmail. Blessings on you, too.

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