L Milton Hankins Poet Fibonacci

Spider Web

a
long
fragile
spidery
silver threadlike street
crossing in nature's G.P.S.
like those swinging bridges in gentle wafting breezes
temporary avenues to more hospitable environmental habitat

written January 3, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger January 13, 2022 at 8:26 AM So this is what a fibonacci is! Nice one. L Milton Hankins January 13, 2022 at 8:45 AM Fun to work with like a word puzzle. Each line has to have the syllable sum of the previous two lines. Interesting, but they can only go about the length of this one. 1-1-2-3-5-8-13-21

Maurice Rigoler January 12, 2022 at 8:36 AM Like the modern simile to a GPS. By coincidence I also posted a few lines on a spider's web. / Maurice L Milton Hankins January 12, 2022 at 9:46 AM Hey, Maurice. I was sitting by an indoor pool watching a web drift with the breezes. Thanks. Great minds often run in the same circles. (grinning)

Maurice Rigoler January 12, 2022 at 8:35 AM I like the modern simile to a GPS. By coincidence I also posted a few lines on a spider's web. / Maurice

John Lawless January 12, 2022 at 6:02 AM nicely written Milton, a surreal snapshot of nature's call L Milton Hankins January 12, 2022 at 7:49 AM Thank you so much, John, for your thoughtful comment on my poem.

Regina Mcintosh January 12, 2022 at 12:51 AM lovely - I sent you soupmail. God bless you, Love, Gina L Milton Hankins January 12, 2022 at 7:50 AM Thanks so much, Gina. I responded to your soupmail. Blessings on you, too.