Spider Songs

Blades of grass, wet under foot, insect eyes  
Dusk, offset by the cricket orchestra 
Muted and receding into the trees and bushes,
Tickled by the wind, rattling snake tail wind 
While we may be in the company of wolves,
A long legged friend is late for the party 

Eyes, little iridescent stars 
Attending to each one, and look there, 
There she is, making the most beautiful geometry 
Parallels within the octagons, pulling silks
An arm for every task, little perpetual motion machine

Is that the Queen of the Night under the rusted iron? 
A forlorn lady, black patent leather, kill a man, maybe two 
With her danger red symmetry, oozing with youth 
And a penchant for paralysis, no one can resist her wine

Then there's the hall of cob webs, threadbare handkerchiefs
Left by ladies who exhausted all of their company 
To be a spectacle under the moon, in the wood pile 
Dressed up in the finest furs, all earth tones 
Stepping out to introduce themselves in girlish droves 

Venus of another sort, these little cursed jezebels 
Hovering on the skin of the water, or on the red brick wall 
Must frequent every happy corner, and slip away at a moment's notice
A real lady always knows when to say goodnight
Such graceful exits through cement cracks
Back to the parlor, to glow in the dark 
And they become spiders again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Song Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 4:39 AM
YOU AND I ARE IN A QUANDRY BC WE LIKE TO WRITE ABOUT DADDY-LONG LEGS BUT WE BOTH KNOW THEY AREN'T REALLY SPIDERS..HAHA THEY HAVE 6 LEGS AND ARE ACTUALLY INSECTS..I STILL CALL THEM SPIDERS ANYWAYS...THIS POEM IS A HOME RUN FROM THE BEGINNING TO THE END WHERE SHE GRACEFULLY EXITS BETWEEN THE CEMENT CRACKS...OUTSTANDING WORK. WILL BE BACK TO READ MORE. PERSONIFICATION DELIGHT!
Jones Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 4:19 PM
Are you coming back Jeremy?
Delaney Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 6:19 PM
Missing you. Hope all is well. Take care SuZ
A   Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 12:33 PM
Hello Jeremy, stopping by to say hi... xox~ Linda
Goodson Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 9:26 AM
Very well done Jeremy! Loved the 3rd stanza for I was bitten by a black widow as a youngster. Thanks for your commit on my poetry. I'll keep looking forward to reading more of your works.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 7:49 AM
I see this one made it too the top 100. Well done
A   Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 8:46 PM
I don't like spiders, but i sure do love your poem. and Like a real lady I'm saying goodnight... Hugs~ Linda
Horstkotter Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 7:37 PM
Great write. Excellent read.
Jones Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 1:20 PM
This is awesome Jeremy!
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 7:18 AM
grad school, huh? I wish you great luck. I never wanted to go that far, but I probably should have!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 6:02 AM
Hi Jeremy, this was a real treat to read. Lots of interwoven images and metophors here.
Jordan Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 7:00 PM
Fantastic! I love the complexity of the piece, the imagery. Very nice... Jack
Onclaud Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 1:27 PM
The use of words really give a stinging accent to the piece... the rhythm is crisp and flows with creepy, mysterious appeal of widowed thoughts.... superbly scribed!..:) huggs!
Hicks Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 12:32 PM
I've been reading a lot of spider poems lately, and I must say yours is incredibly interesting. Especially the comparison between the wolves... you zoom down to something so small, when something as dangerous as wolves are coming at you. Your descriptions were literary treats, and I liked how I had no idea where it was heading...
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 12:56 AM
VERY creatiive work here, Jeremy. Just for being the best poem I saw tonight so far, I fave thee!!! This is most unusual and I am wondering if it is also for that contest using lots of description?
Dunn Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 4:34 PM
Very entertaining and interesting at the same time. Nice visual creepy ending I enjoyed it alot.
Anglesey Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 10:28 AM
WOW. This is spectacular. Love the metaphor between the ladies and the spiders
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 5:22 AM
Great work that you have penned..Great poetic quality..Sara
Delaney Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 10:35 PM
This is wonderful. I am favng it to read over and over. Spiders are a most fascinating subject for poems. I love the happy corners and graceful exits. Suz
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