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Spider Protection

Been screeched heap things demoness strumpet scoundrel with wings thumped lizard of myth legend since intonates Darkness scarpered whilst famished soul prominent & sharp-witted by prurient screams not for shadows but untamed spawn sighs Written: April 26, 2023 A Brian Strand Standard No 1212 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Yann Rolland

Date: 4/26/2023 4:43:00 PM

an original piece, let run the mind, i appreciated Good luck for the contest yann

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/26/2023 9:24:00 AM

A creative/fun write. Love It. Have a blessed day writing away...........

Lin Lane

Date: 4/26/2023 6:47:00 AM

That's quite an effort, Lasaad! I've returned with my first post in almost 2 months and glad to be writing again.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/26/2023 5:58:00 AM

Very creative work my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/26/2023 3:48:00 AM

Creative work for Brian's contest. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. A person would definitely need spider protection at some times, in some circumstances, and in some areas. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2023 1:28:00 AM

- Not exactly beautiful creatures ... love the shape ... best wishes in the contest, Las :) - hugs