Spider Plant Verse 3

Row of bamboo at lake’s edge.
Lattice-laced curtains.

NB: Inspired by Suzanne Delaney’s contest and subsequent blog (3-29-2023). This form arose from the oral tradition of “call and response.” In the rhythm of their work and perhaps in the spirit of a game or to relieve boredom, people would call out to each other. The first speaker called out a line that contained an image. A second speaker replied using a second image. This second image was meant to function as an elaboration or metaphor of the first. No titles, no particular rhyme or syllabic scheme.
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Romios Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 4:02 PM
I like the peaceful imagery Pangie
Fowler Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 4:08 PM
Thanks dear friend! :)
Daniel Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 7:15 AM
Wonderful, you rock, Linda:)
Fowler Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 7:43 AM
LOL. I get it. Thanks Jo! :)
Turner Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 2:31 PM
This is a good metaphor. I like this one, Alice.
Fowler Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 2:43 PM
I appreciate your comments Daniel. I'm glad you like it:)
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