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Spider Plant Verse 1

Misty creek shimmering in moonlight. Cold glass of lemonade. NB: Title changed from 'Bantu' due to sensitivity expressed in Suzanne Delaney’s blog (3-29-2023).

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Date: 4/8/2023 9:23:00 AM
hmmm, I did not catch this idea from her blog. I thought we were just to say bantu. Anyway, well done, and congratulations
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/8/2023 9:32:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. I took it from the quote of her source: "My suggestion: Spider Plant Verse (in honour of this first contest that was triggered by our poems)."
Date: 4/8/2023 4:17:00 AM
This one is very descriptive - I love it! And the title is growing on me :) Congratulations on your win, Linda.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 4/8/2023 12:33:00 PM
You are welcome :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/8/2023 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Suzette. I'm glad you like it :) I appreciate the thoughtful and supportive comments. :)
Date: 4/6/2023 11:28:00 PM
Good one Linda :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/7/2023 7:30:00 AM
Thanks so much! I appreciate your visits and comments. :)
Date: 4/6/2023 2:55:00 PM
Looks like SuZ liked it too! Congratulations, Alice:)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/7/2023 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Daniel. Have a great day! :)
Date: 3/24/2023 11:17:00 PM
Very well penned entwined imagery. Good luck, Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/25/2023 6:01:00 AM
I appreciate your visit and supportive words Subimal. :)
Date: 3/24/2023 7:06:00 PM
Yup Picture perfect ! Has to be a winner. Well done my friend. (early congtats).
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/25/2023 6:00:00 AM
From your ears to SuZ'! LOL Thanks Wen. :)
Date: 3/24/2023 4:15:00 PM
Very clever Bantu, Linda Alice! The implied echo of shimmering contained by the cold glass and the moonlight! Elizabeth
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/25/2023 6:00:00 AM
My thanks for your encouraging comment Elizabeth. :)
Date: 3/24/2023 2:18:00 PM
Great entry for the contest Linda, a form I've never heard of. Best of luck and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/24/2023 3:25:00 PM
I hadn't heard of it either Tom, but there are many I'm sure I've missed. :) Have a good weekend yourself. Thanks for the nice wishes! :)
Date: 3/24/2023 1:45:00 PM
A yummy one!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/24/2023 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. :)
Date: 3/24/2023 8:45:00 AM
Good one :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/24/2023 10:07:00 AM
May thanks for the visit and comment! :)
Date: 3/24/2023 8:31:00 AM
Refreshing!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/24/2023 8:32:00 AM
Hi Kim. Good to see you here. Thanks!
Date: 3/24/2023 8:29:00 AM
This one is excellent, Alice. I really like it.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/24/2023 8:31:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate you and your support. :)

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