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Spider Plant Verse 1

Misty creek shimmering in moonlight.
Cold glass of lemonade.

NB: Title changed from 'Bantu' due to sensitivity expressed in Suzanne Delaney’s blog (3-29-2023).

Copyright © Linda Alice Fowler | Year Posted 2023

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Andrea Dietrich

April 8, 2023 at 9:23 AM

hmmm, I did not catch this idea from her blog. I thought we were just to say bantu. Anyway, well done, and congratulations

Linda Alice Fowler

April 8, 2023 at 9:32 AM

Thank you Andrea. I took it from the quote of her source: "My suggestion: Spider Plant Verse (in honour of this first contest that was triggered by our poems)."

Suzette Richards

April 8, 2023 at 4:17 AM

This one is very descriptive - I love it! And the title is growing on me :) Congratulations on your win, Linda.

Suzette Richards

April 8, 2023 at 12:33 PM

You are welcome :)

Linda Alice Fowler

April 8, 2023 at 7:12 AM

Thank you Suzette. I'm glad you like it :) I appreciate the thoughtful and supportive comments. :)

April 6, 2023 at 2:55 PM

Looks like SuZ liked it too! Congratulations, Alice:)

Linda Alice Fowler

April 7, 2023 at 7:30 AM

Thanks Daniel. Have a great day! :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

March 24, 2023 at 11:17 PM

Very well penned entwined imagery. Good luck, Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler

March 25, 2023 at 6:01 AM

I appreciate your visit and supportive words Subimal. :)

March 24, 2023 at 7:06 PM

Yup Picture perfect ! Has to be a winner. Well done my friend. (early congtats).

Linda Alice Fowler

March 25, 2023 at 6:00 AM

From your ears to SuZ'! LOL Thanks Wen. :)

Elizabeth Mccann

March 24, 2023 at 4:15 PM

Very clever Bantu, Linda Alice! The implied echo of shimmering contained by the cold glass and the moonlight! Elizabeth

Linda Alice Fowler

March 25, 2023 at 6:00 AM

My thanks for your encouraging comment Elizabeth. :)

March 24, 2023 at 2:18 PM

Great entry for the contest Linda, a form I've never heard of. Best of luck and enjoy your weekend. Tom

Linda Alice Fowler

March 24, 2023 at 3:25 PM

I hadn't heard of it either Tom, but there are many I'm sure I've missed. :) Have a good weekend yourself. Thanks for the nice wishes! :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 24, 2023 at 1:45 PM

A yummy one!

Linda Alice Fowler

March 24, 2023 at 3:24 PM

Thanks Andrea. :)

March 24, 2023 at 8:31 AM

Refreshing!

Linda Alice Fowler

March 24, 2023 at 8:32 AM

Hi Kim. Good to see you here. Thanks!

March 24, 2023 at 8:29 AM

This one is excellent, Alice. I really like it.

Linda Alice Fowler

March 24, 2023 at 8:31 AM

Thank you my friend. I appreciate you and your support. :)

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