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Spider Haiku

tiny spider web
catches this fallen blossom
wrong prey to pounce on.

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Carol Breslin

October 7, 2015 at 8:46 AM

Great poem!!! I want to let you know that I shared your spider haiku on a Wordpress blog. You can see it here: https://aloadabobbins.wordpress.com/2015/10/07/webs/comment-page-1/#comment-530

Poet Destroyer A

August 24, 2014 at 10:45 AM

Hi Suzanne, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA

Daver Austin

August 18, 2014 at 12:01 PM

Sensitive. I love Haiku. Congrats on the selection. daver

Suzanne Delaney

August 18, 2014 at 6:57 PM

Thanks for reading, Daver: I really did witness this funny little scene . Suz

Casarah Nance

August 10, 2014 at 5:49 PM

poor spider no food today. Great haiku great win :)

Suzanne Delaney

August 18, 2014 at 6:59 PM

Thanks Casara: I do appreciate your comments. SuZ

Paul Callus

August 8, 2014 at 2:50 PM

Congratulations, Suzanne! I'm fascinated by spiders, and yours is a typical garden spider; enjoyed! // paul

Suzanne Delaney

August 9, 2014 at 12:03 PM

Hi Paul: I am a great spider watcher myself. I so appreciate your kind comments, If you type Spiders into the search here it brings up a great selection, Many thanks

Nette Onclaud

August 8, 2014 at 2:25 PM

this is delightful, suzanne.. huge congrats!.. huggs

Suzanne Delaney

August 9, 2014 at 3:24 PM

Thanks Nette: So good of you to visit me.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 11:42 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney

August 9, 2014 at 3:25 PM

Hi Anne-Lise: Always a treasure to see you.

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 8, 2014 at 1:09 AM

Wonderful write, Suzanne. congrats on the win.

Suzanne Delaney

August 9, 2014 at 3:26 PM

Many Thanks Dr, Ram I was thrilled to be chosen a winner.

Andrea Dietrich

August 8, 2014 at 12:01 AM

Nice one, Suz. It's so cool to see where people go with their AHA moments. Congrats.

Suzanne Delaney

August 9, 2014 at 3:27 PM

Hi Andrea: I appreciate you for stopping by. I hope to go read and comment on the other winners soon,

Kash Poet

June 29, 2013 at 2:58 PM

Good one .I love haiku.here is one by me-- a big catch--/in the spider's web/the full moon~

Suzanne Delaney

August 9, 2014 at 3:28 PM

Nice Haiku Kash; a perfet aha moment

Poet Destroyer A

April 9, 2013 at 8:28 PM

I do not like spiders, but i really like your haiku. the last one was my favorite. xox~ Linda

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

April 6, 2013 at 7:48 PM

Dear Suzanne, these are great Haiku First ones I have read by YOU. You had to see the Spider grab the blossom. I saw a spider go after a Pine needle. He tore it out of the web and rewove the web in a matter of seconds. Haiku and Senryu are 2 of my favourite forms.Superb Pen. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

James Fraser

April 5, 2013 at 5:32 PM

The latter line cements this series Suzanne. Their paths never deviate as they know exactly where they are stranded, by that I mean attached in the awaiting. Nice write, have a lovely weekend, James :)

Debbie Duncan

April 4, 2013 at 7:23 PM

Love the haiku Suzy ;} I have one called haiku six. Very sad about JonBenet, thank you for reading my words ;}

Kash Poet

March 29, 2013 at 11:50 AM

Very nice haiku by you Suz.Enjoyed the read.

Andrea Dietrich

March 28, 2013 at 11:10 PM

these are so interesting, Suz. I don't see you do haiku too often. the first one is humorous to me and the second one has a great image!!

Suzanne Delaney

March 29, 2013 at 11:31 AM

Hi Andrea: Lovely to see you. I did these for a oriental stamp Art Kimono series and I was hooked. The first one was a real scene I saw once and it did make me chucle to see the spider run out only to find a blossom. Hugs, SuZ

Sara Kendrick

March 28, 2013 at 4:48 PM

Great work..Enjoyed reading your creativity this eve..Thanks for stopping by..I hope that your niece enjoys the poem..Sara

Suzanne Delaney

March 28, 2013 at 8:39 PM

Thanks for visiting Sara, I am enjoying getting to know new poetry friends. My niece is in Australia so with your permission I can send the Nursery Rhyme by email to her Mum, for her to read it to her. Hugs, SuZ

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