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Just one Haiku Contest. Sponsored by Sara Kendrick
07/31/23

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Spider Haiku

creepy red spider
perhaps it is venomous ~
i’ll check on the web

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natureword playhaiku

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

August 28, 2023 at 11:02 PM

All spiders are creepy, yet not all of them are venomous. I have no comment about spiders colors. Have a nice day :)

Jan Allison

August 29, 2023 at 1:27 AM

thanks so much for dropping by to comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

August 11, 2023 at 5:16 AM

LOL…cute one! Congratulations!

Jan Allison

August 29, 2023 at 1:27 AM

thanks kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Linda Alice Fowler

August 10, 2023 at 1:33 PM

Back again. I knew it had to be on the list Jan. Just too cute and clever. Congratulations! :)

Jan Allison

August 29, 2023 at 1:27 AM

thanks so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

August 10, 2023 at 1:24 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. I liked the humor in this one. Thank you for participating. Sara

Jan Allison

August 29, 2023 at 1:27 AM

thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

August 10, 2023 at 11:13 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write/red spider picture. If you are now checking on the web then it toooooo later. Hospital Time... Enjoyed It. Have a fun/safe day.............

Jan Allison

August 29, 2023 at 1:26 AM

thanks Paula:-) hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

August 7, 2023 at 7:43 AM

The best kind of clever! hehe This must do coolly in the contest dear Jan :D

Jan Allison

August 29, 2023 at 1:26 AM

thanks Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx

Sam Kauffman

August 3, 2023 at 11:26 AM

Very, very creative! Nice turn in your ku! Reflects your delightful sense of humor my friend! Best wishes for the contest! BTW - what did you find in your web crawling?! Hugs!

Jan Allison

August 5, 2023 at 1:38 PM

Thanks so much Sam, the web said beware of red spiders... they suck your blood lol lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Linda Alice Fowler

August 2, 2023 at 5:16 PM

LOLOL! Just fabulous Jan! Hugs, :)

Jan Allison

August 5, 2023 at 1:37 PM

thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

August 1, 2023 at 10:12 AM

Oh! Love your spider Haiku, Jan! Such an unexpected and well-done turn with the last line! ;)

Jan Allison

August 5, 2023 at 1:37 PM

Thanks sweet Sandra, i couldnt resist that final line:-) hugs Jan xx

Christina Bowring

August 1, 2023 at 8:54 AM

Very clever Haiku Jan. Amusing too. Warmest wishes.

Jan Allison

August 5, 2023 at 1:36 PM

Thanks Christina, a little tongue in cheek humour with web wordplay:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

August 1, 2023 at 3:42 AM

Love it. God bless you sweet friend. I love you, Gina

Jan Allison

August 5, 2023 at 1:36 PM

Thanks Regina xx

Joanna Daniel

August 1, 2023 at 2:36 AM

Yeah, google it, I say, fun write, Jan:)

Jan Allison

August 1, 2023 at 3:23 AM

Thanks so much Jo:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh

July 31, 2023 at 1:19 PM

Nothing itsy bitsy about your spider haiku Jan, I think you’ve done a pretty potent job on this one, with humour too, all the best for contest, cheers David

Jan Allison

July 31, 2023 at 3:49 PM

thanks David I couldnt resist the web word play:-) hugs Jan xx