Spiced Sky

If we had black stars on a whitened day, we would have a peppered sky
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Lawrence Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 7:52 AM
What a sight it would be … love your imagination Charlie ! Hugs, Susan :)
Wolf Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 8:18 PM
Achoo!
Tor Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 5:22 PM
That would be cool Charlie would love to see that...
Goldsmith Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 2:15 PM
You are so right. Few words with a story told. Have a wonderful day/night sky..............
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 2:02 PM
This one is quite intriguing Charlie, black stars on a whitened day could be alluding to the Oscar’s, yet I see peppered sky as a bombardment from above, a thought provoking Monoku with so much depth and meaning, cheers David
Buhagiar Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 8:30 AM
That is pure satire.
Pandit Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 7:45 AM
Splendid imagination, Charlie.
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