Spiced Sky

If we had black stars on a whitened day, we would have a peppered sky

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 1/29/2023 7:52:00 AM

What a sight it would be … love your imagination Charlie ! Hugs, Susan :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/28/2023 8:18:00 PM

Achoo!

Michael Tor

Date: 1/26/2023 5:22:00 PM

That would be cool Charlie would love to see that...

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/26/2023 2:15:00 PM

You are so right. Few words with a story told. Have a wonderful day/night sky..............

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/26/2023 2:02:00 PM

This one is quite intriguing Charlie, black stars on a whitened day could be alluding to the Oscar’s, yet I see peppered sky as a bombardment from above, a thought provoking Monoku with so much depth and meaning, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/26/2023 8:30:00 AM

That is pure satire.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/26/2023 7:45:00 AM

Splendid imagination, Charlie.