William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Spherical Exchange

Spherical Exchange

Dawn unwraps the sky and wraps up twilight,
All birds, plus boats, exalt anointing prime,
Colors glossed to their righteous hues, picked time,
Advent horizon ere an orb takes height,
Chance night favored souls harmoniously,
Spheres gift display ceremoniously,
Dawn unwraps the sky and wraps up twilight.

2019 October 16

*3rd Place*

Make it Seven
~~Joseph May

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Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2019 at 5:24 PM your main line (first and last) is utterly charming, William. Congrats on your win. William Kelii Kekaula October 22, 2019 at 5:55 PM My heartfelt appreciation for your kind expression ~ Aloha always William

Jan Allison October 21, 2019 at 11:39 AM I especially loved the repeated line William, a beautifully crafted poem, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx William Kelii Kekaula October 21, 2019 at 11:44 AM My grateful thanks for your kindness Jan ~ Aloha always William

Paul Callus October 21, 2019 at 10:15 AM Congratulations on your fine win, william. Enjoyed your poem, especially your repeated line. Regards // paul William Kelii Kekaula October 21, 2019 at 11:06 AM My appreciation Paul for your thoughtful sharing ~ Aloha always William

Joseph May October 20, 2019 at 7:16 PM Very nicely penned William, Congrats on your win.. William Kelii Kekaula October 20, 2019 at 7:53 PM Blessings art thee and thine ~ Aloha always William

Sandra Adams October 20, 2019 at 6:43 PM love your wording in this piece...well penned my friend, congratulations on your win :) William Kelii Kekaula October 20, 2019 at 7:50 PM Ah, thy graciousness speaketh gentle of thee ~ Aloha always William

Silent One October 16, 2019 at 2:24 AM you did great here, great imagery and some nice use of words.... this should do well... Aloha... William Kelii Kekaula October 16, 2019 at 2:42 AM Optimism gravitates, crossing fingers though one is sprained ~ Aloha always William