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Spherical Exchange Dawn unwraps the sky and wraps up twilight, All birds, plus boats, exalt anointing prime, Colors glossed to their righteous hues, picked time, Advent horizon ere an orb takes height, Chance night favored souls harmoniously, Spheres gift display ceremoniously, Dawn unwraps the sky and wraps up twilight. 2019 October 16 *3rd Place* Make it Seven ~~Joseph May

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2019 5:24:00 PM

your main line (first and last) is utterly charming, William. Congrats on your win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/22/2019 5:55:00 PM

My heartfelt appreciation for your kind expression ~ Aloha always William

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2019 11:39:00 AM

I especially loved the repeated line William, a beautifully crafted poem, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/21/2019 11:44:00 AM

My grateful thanks for your kindness Jan ~ Aloha always William

Paul Callus

Date: 10/21/2019 10:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win, william. Enjoyed your poem, especially your repeated line. Regards // paul

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/21/2019 11:06:00 AM

My appreciation Paul for your thoughtful sharing ~ Aloha always William

Joseph May

Date: 10/20/2019 7:16:00 PM

Very nicely penned William, Congrats on your win..

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/20/2019 7:53:00 PM

Blessings art thee and thine ~ Aloha always William

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/20/2019 6:43:00 PM

love your wording in this piece...well penned my friend, congratulations on your win :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/20/2019 7:50:00 PM

Ah, thy graciousness speaketh gentle of thee ~ Aloha always William

Silent One

Date: 10/16/2019 2:24:00 AM

you did great here, great imagery and some nice use of words.... this should do well... Aloha...

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/16/2019 2:42:00 AM

Optimism gravitates, crossing fingers though one is sprained ~ Aloha always William