Spent Adult

I adore you, curled and satisfied, 
your beauty full displayed, 
the swell, the fullness of your breasts 
make thoughts of sadness fade. 
Your lips so red and aggravated, 
trembling with desire, 
your form exhausted from the fire, 
my manhood enervated. 

Spent, the zenith of our passion 
sealed and stricken with a kiss, 
we lie content, the aftermath, 
the pinnacle of bliss. 
'Tis heav'n, the summit of our love, 
enshrined in dreams so rare, 
a promise made to order 
with a locket of your hair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Rodgers Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Vivid imagery and splendid phrasing, with the details left to the imagination. Well done. Dave
A  Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 9:10 AM
A Beautiful and unique way in sharing what lies beneath your passionate heart. Luv. Skat
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 10:08 AM
Thanks SKAT! Not too specific? I hope not. Luv Keith
Jones Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 9:17 PM
Wow....awesome....haven't been on soup in quite a while...sure have missed wonderful friends like you Keith...this is lovely
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 6:58 AM
Thanks Donna! K.
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 4:15 PM
very sensual Keith:-) hugs Jan xx
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 4:18 PM
Thanks Jan. I never use explicit scenes or language in my erotica, in fact, I very rarely write erotica. This is the first piece in quite some time.
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