Spent

Outside, Autumn shows
Yesterday's life was in bloom
My life, it mirrors









http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-14.php
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May 21, 2011 at 7:32 AM
Much captured in just three lines. Gives the reader something to think about. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen
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May 19, 2011 at 5:09 AM
An awesome reflective senryu James, love it :)
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May 18, 2011 at 5:46 PM
Oh, gosh...do I feel this way sometimes too, James. Where did spring go...and why did it leave so quickly!? Great senryu!
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May 18, 2011 at 1:21 PM
enjoyed reading this creative piece of fine poetry.
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May 18, 2011 at 1:19 PM
very meaningful expression with great images, James
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May 18, 2011 at 12:11 PM
how deep and beautifully expressed, dera king..:) huggs, nette
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May 18, 2011 at 11:55 AM
I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them James. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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