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Spelunking With My Love

Red Rock Canyon, Nevada; 106 Degrees The Sun so HOT it could Freeze; the Breeze I help HER with HER Equipment, she helps with mine I am the First to Enter: Slowly; I see in HER Eyes, Hesitation BABY there are no "BATS"! the Desert; for them has no Design WE enter Together : The Moist Heat of the Entrance, so Refreshing So "DIVINE" The outside had a Burning Desire to come inside TOGETHER WE WALK AWAY The Farther and Deeper WE go; I see an "ANGELIC FACE" ; GOD'S Creation When WE go as far as WE can : It's time to get out : I hold YOUR Tender Hand; WE KISS An ETERNAL KISS, F O R E V E R; A L W A Y S; Together as O N E : Such B L I S S As WE relax for a moment before WE put the Equipment away; I see a Question on her Brow Did YOU enjoy Today, MY LOVE? "Get YOUR Equipment ready and WE will do it again N O W

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Date: 1/1/2012 5:14:00 PM
Another beautiful memory captured in a wonderful poem. Always, Laura
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Date: 12/6/2008 9:20:00 PM
wow! the poem was so incredible,i cant even think of the words to say.as i read the poem i amagined the memory in my mind and i thought to my self wow! your poetry is so divine.
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Date: 9/14/2008 10:32:00 AM
Sounds like such a beautiful memory. What an interesting and exciting thing to do! Of course, experiencing it with your true love of loves, must make it even more wonderful and I have no doubt it stands out crystal clear in your mind. Captured beautifully in poetry to treasure forever. Love, Shar
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