Spelunking With My Love

Red Rock Canyon, Nevada; 106 Degrees
The Sun so HOT it could Freeze; the Breeze
I help HER with HER Equipment, she helps with mine
I am the First to Enter: Slowly; I see in HER Eyes, Hesitation
BABY there are no "BATS"! the Desert; for them has no Design
WE enter Together : The Moist Heat of the Entrance, so Refreshing So "DIVINE"
The outside had a Burning Desire to come inside TOGETHER WE WALK AWAY
The Farther and Deeper WE go; I see an "ANGELIC FACE" ; GOD'S Creation
When WE go as far as WE can : It's time to get out : I hold YOUR Tender Hand; WE KISS
An ETERNAL KISS, F O R E V E R;  A L W A Y S; Together as  O N E : Such B L I S S
As WE relax for a moment before WE put the Equipment away; I see a Question on her Brow
Did YOU enjoy Today, MY LOVE? "Get YOUR Equipment ready and WE will do it again N O W
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Breidenthal Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 5:14 PM
Another beautiful memory captured in a wonderful poem. Always, Laura
Carley Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 9:20 PM
wow! the poem was so incredible,i cant even think of the words to say.as i read the poem i amagined the memory in my mind and i thought to my self wow! your poetry is so divine.
Winter Avatar
September 14, 2008 at 10:32 AM
Sounds like such a beautiful memory. What an interesting and exciting thing to do! Of course, experiencing it with your true love of loves, must make it even more wonderful and I have no doubt it stands out crystal clear in your mind. Captured beautifully in poetry to treasure forever. Love, Shar
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