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Speeding Star On a Journey

~ November's Sun ~ The sun sweeps through the sky now a speeding star on a journey On earth, eyes peeled upward, yearning ~ daylight hustled away on a gurney

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Date: 11/21/2021 4:56:00 PM
Very lovely imagery my friend.
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Date: 11/14/2021 6:59:00 PM
Our days are also so hazy now with rain clouds looming in the sky and 'daylight hustled away on a gurney'. Love this expression.... Bravo Gershon !
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/15/2021 6:20:00 PM
Heh, heh: Not too many rhymes for 'journey,' I guess. ~ Ernie

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