Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Speeding Star On a Journey

~ November's Sun ~


     The sun sweeps through the sky now
        a speeding star on a journey

     On earth, eyes peeled upward, yearning ~
        daylight hustled away on a gurney

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Caren Krutsinger November 21, 2021 at 4:56 PM Very lovely imagery my friend.

Valsa George November 14, 2021 at 6:59 PM Our days are also so hazy now with rain clouds looming in the sky and 'daylight hustled away on a gurney'. Love this expression.... Bravo Gershon ! Gershon Wolf November 15, 2021 at 6:20 PM Heh, heh: Not too many rhymes for 'journey,' I guess. ~ Ernie