Spectrum

Spectrum wavelength giving off hues
Eyes drink in any color they choose

Glorious rainbows catch the light
Joy and hope dancing into our sight

Mind may limit but soul perceives  
A vibrant union the heart believes




Pts 1,2 and 3 of Brian Strand's Interval Contest
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Nieves Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 8:23 AM
Oops! can't forget to thank you for the motivating comments. I.N.
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October 13, 2009 at 8:19 AM
Wonderful script Corrine. Love the title, too! and the form of poetry-Crystalline-creates a play of words because the spectrum comes from the refraction of crystals. Felicitations!
Augustus Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 1:23 PM
Nice! I really like this! It really picks up for me when I read the second line---"Eyes drink in any color they choose". I love that! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Moreno Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 1:06 PM
Corinne, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
Richards Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 7:38 AM
Well done Corinne!! Congratulations on your success in Brian's contest! ~ Love, Carrie
George   Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 6:40 AM
Dear Corinne, Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest. i especially like the last stanza. Love, Elaine
Brown Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 3:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Corinne. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 1:02 AM
Congrats on you success in my contest Corinne.Rgds Brian My latest contest Five&Twenty is now open
Strand Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 8:56 AM
It is up to you Corinne,but maybe the same form for the edit will make/ give it t a better poetic flow .Thanks for your interest and supprt.Rgds Brian
Strand Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 11:41 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Corinne.Rgds Brian
Lopez Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 9:18 AM
eyes drinking color ... what a line....... good luck with the rest of this writing!
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