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Spectrum wavelength giving off hues Eyes drink in any color they choose Glorious rainbows catch the light Joy and hope dancing into our sight Mind may limit but soul perceives A vibrant union the heart believes Pts 1,2 and 3 of Brian Strand's Interval Contest

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Date: 10/13/2009 8:23:00 AM
Oops! can't forget to thank you for the motivating comments. I.N.
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Date: 10/13/2009 8:19:00 AM
Wonderful script Corrine. Love the title, too! and the form of poetry-Crystalline-creates a play of words because the spectrum comes from the refraction of crystals. Felicitations!
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Date: 9/30/2009 1:23:00 PM
Nice! I really like this! It really picks up for me when I read the second line---"Eyes drink in any color they choose". I love that! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 9/30/2009 1:06:00 PM
Corinne, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/30/2009 7:38:00 AM
Well done Corinne!! Congratulations on your success in Brian's contest! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 9/30/2009 6:40:00 AM
Dear Corinne, Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest. i especially like the last stanza. Love, Elaine
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Date: 9/30/2009 3:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Corinne. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2009 1:02:00 AM
Congrats on you success in my contest Corinne.Rgds Brian My latest contest Five&Twenty is now open
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Date: 9/16/2009 8:56:00 AM
It is up to you Corinne,but maybe the same form for the edit will make/ give it t a better poetic flow .Thanks for your interest and supprt.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/15/2009 11:41:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Corinne.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/15/2009 9:18:00 AM
eyes drinking color ... what a line....... good luck with the rest of this writing!
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