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After: Gray and Gold by John Rogers Cox, 1943.    

War roars above ~ a hemisphere gone coal black, blasted with skin ~ned ash, soot ~scores the sky and rubble roils; blood can not travel on the wind. Lines cross, posts cross, peace cru~ cified. Food thought, wry humor displayed in fields of grain from sea to sea. Commun~ nication cut-off deafened by the omnipresent gale. Fenced in safety a jest. The gold~ en fuel, isolation will not save us. War roars above ~ a hemisphere gone coal black blasted with skin ~ned ash, soot scores the sky and rubble roils Blood can not travel the wind. An Ekphastic written in the Shape Form After: Gray and Gold by John Rogers Cox, 1943.

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Date: 9/5/2016 3:21:00 PM
I like this. Great write. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 5/20/2016 6:45:00 AM
Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/20/2016 11:29:00 AM
Thanks so much Funom!
Date: 1/12/2016 7:54:00 PM
Ah, to go to war and never be able to return to one's homeland... "and the living just pass by"...I'd like to learn controlled writing like this, with the emotion just as or often more powerful. Thank you, Deb. :-)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/12/2016 7:56:00 PM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 1/9/2016 1:09:00 PM
I agree with the Silent One. Great as always, Deb.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/9/2016 3:30:00 PM
Thanks Elaine why don't you go read my blog & jump in with both feet?

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