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Specters of Slaves

Nature trail extends for miles
Surrounded by wetlands and lakes
Each step I take brings me closer
To an old plantation, where I climb the stiles

For it was here that slaves once toiled
To raise and harvest sugar cane
Their cries and moans can still be heard
And the Plantation’s magic is spoiled

Within this forest are the echoes
Of every gasp, every word
Slaves once uttered in their daily trials
In these deep woods, far from the meadows

Spanish settlers claimed this site
Where Natives suffered in their plight
Shadowy specters never kissed by sunlight 
Reverberating sadness in a world void of light 




Written February 19, 2020
N/A in Joseph May's “Lines to Awaken Your Muse” poetry contest, judged March 2, 2020.
Line Chosen:  #4 by Robert Frost - “Whose woods these are, I think I know”
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Fenn Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 7:00 PM
Wow! What a great social justice poem!
Callus Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Dear Carolyn, you not only bring back to life the suffering of slaves, but also manage to take the reader along with you to the same plantation, and for a moment we partake of their cruel situation. ~ Belated congrats re p.o.t.d. Hugs // paul
Tugaff Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 2:32 AM
Carolyn, you did it again my friend. Ernilando
Staton Avatar
March 6, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Wonderfully written. Such a beautiful building with such a torrid past.
Romios Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 4:59 PM
Best wishes, Caroyn! Panagiota xx This is superb writing. Panagiota xx
Ashley Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 2:57 PM
Carolyn, your golden pen spills such powerful and poignant ink. You express man’s inhumanity to humanity in a haunting, captivating and melancholic way and shine a light on the ugliness of slavery. I loved the pensive aura of your brilliant poem. Belated congratulations for your well deserved POTD honor, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 3:28 PM
wow, you really brought the melancholy of it all. I think this should do very well in the contest, dear friend.
Devonshire Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 1:56 PM
It didn't place in the contest, but thanks for reading!
Mcconnell Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Lovely penning Carolyn, showing the darker side of slavery and it's effects. Blessings,Gordon
Watt Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 3:52 PM
Carolyn, an amazing write about the darker side of our history. Congratulations on your POTD ~ John
Goldsmith Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 2:22 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Nice poem and picture. Wish it said what old plantation it is..............
Devonshire Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 1:57 PM
I am having trouble remembering the name, but think it is St. George Plantation. Thanks for reading, Paula.
Gondolf Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 12:58 PM
I believe this plantation is Oak Alley which I have visited. It is a magnificent old house, it's such a shame it has this dark past. Congrats on POTD, Carolyn. Hugs, John
Michael Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 5:50 AM
And what a drunken belt that is...Congratulations Charlie on POTD
Nicole Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 10:55 PM
Looking at the photo here, and the beauty all around. Slavery isn't the first thing that enters my mind. It happened. Yet, there are times I forget- until I am reminded. Like here within your words. Congratulations Carolyn, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Kitchin Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 9:14 PM
Congratulations on POTD with your powerfully penned poem!
Allison Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 2:11 PM
Such a powerful piece Carolyn. many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 12:38 PM
I am so pleased to see this meaningful poem honored with POTD Carolyn. You already know how much I loved this poem by my Fave. Congratulations on your deserving POTD honor! xxoo
Ifeanyichukwu Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 11:06 AM
Carolyn your poem paints a clear cut picture of the anguish and depressions of slaves. It's an amazing work and well penned. Congratulations on your POTD.
Proxenos Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 9:31 AM
Back with congratulations Carolyn on the honor of your poem been chosen as POTD. Blessings, my friend. Jennifer.
Turner Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on POTD Carolyn. I sent you a soupmail:)
Sands Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations for POTD Carolyn :)
Pandit Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 6:37 AM
Back with congrats on poem of the day, Carolyn and upon another reading I am adding this to my FAVE poems. So well deserved, my friend.
Warrior Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 5:56 AM
Powerful write Carolyn...Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...all the best from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)
Adams Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 5:16 AM
Wonderfully penned even in its poignancy. A part of history that will always haunt, great message in your lines. Congratulations on your POTD :) hugs
Michael Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 5:12 AM
"Their cries and moans can still be heard" this forever be true...Love the imagery that you've shared...it only goes to show...it's not over even after we're dead...Congratulations sweet Carolyn on POTD
Devonshire Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 3:55 PM
You're right, Arturo. Earthly death is just the start of a new life. Thanks for reading!
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 4:37 AM
- Heartbreaking and excellent written, Carolyn - Congratulations so much on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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