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Speck In the Universe

Galaxy of stars
Creates dramatic backdrop
For awesome rock form



For Gareths competition

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/7/2010 2:44:00 AM

Well written and nice imagery in your Haiku...Enjoyed reading it this morning! And thank you for your comment on "No Beer but Whisky".. I 'm sometimes enjoying a 'nightcap' of Scotch to end the day...Have a great time and keep your pen flowing!...All the best..Gert

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 5/13/2010 8:40:00 AM

I can not but help think of Copernicus and Galileo when I read this. It is majestic in a minor key. Thank you for your kind words and Regards, Gerard.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/11/2010 10:21:00 AM

Haven't seen the picture or the contest but reads like a winner...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2010 3:47:00 PM

Wishing you the best in the contest dear Janette. I want to thank you so very much for your comments. Sorry they are late coming I was just now able to get into the site and leave comments. I was able to post poems today but that was about it. Love, Carol

Margaret Okubo

Date: 5/4/2010 6:44:00 AM

Excellent. Gives a vivd picture of our earth's place in the universe.Thank you for your kind comments Janette.

James Fraser

Date: 5/2/2010 8:46:00 AM

Terrific Haiku Janette, wonderfully written >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2010 8:58:00 PM

Very nice haiku, janette. thanks so much for your blog comment. I too love the water. LUv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/20/2010 7:45:00 PM

Thankxxx Janette as so many other sponsors are having the same problem as I am..all entries have disappeared from placing them ..that screen has disappeared also.. thankxxx for letting me know.. appreciate and good luck with your contest... my entry for yours still shows as being entered on my member entries page ..please let me know if it disappears too..thankxxx luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/20/2010 12:48:00 PM

Hi Janette...can u please check to see if your contest entries are intact... as all of mine have disappeared from my current contest... please let me know..thankxxx luv.. Linda-Marie..