Speck In the Universe

Galaxy of stars
Creates dramatic backdrop
For awesome rock form



For Gareths competition
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Knop Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 2:44 AM
Well written and nice imagery in your Haiku...Enjoyed reading it this morning! And thank you for your comment on "No Beer but Whisky".. I 'm sometimes enjoying a 'nightcap' of Scotch to end the day...Have a great time and keep your pen flowing!...All the best..Gert
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May 13, 2010 at 8:40 AM
I can not but help think of Copernicus and Galileo when I read this. It is majestic in a minor key. Thank you for your kind words and Regards, Gerard.
Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 10:21 AM
Haven't seen the picture or the contest but reads like a winner...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Brown Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Wishing you the best in the contest dear Janette. I want to thank you so very much for your comments. Sorry they are late coming I was just now able to get into the site and leave comments. I was able to post poems today but that was about it. Love, Carol
Okubo Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 6:44 AM
Excellent. Gives a vivd picture of our earth's place in the universe.Thank you for your kind comments Janette.
Fraser Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 8:46 AM
Terrific Haiku Janette, wonderfully written >> James
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 8:58 PM
Very nice haiku, janette. thanks so much for your blog comment. I too love the water. LUv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 7:45 PM
Thankxxx Janette as so many other sponsors are having the same problem as I am..all entries have disappeared from placing them ..that screen has disappeared also.. thankxxx for letting me know.. appreciate and good luck with your contest... my entry for yours still shows as being entered on my member entries page ..please let me know if it disappears too..thankxxx luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Hi Janette...can u please check to see if your contest entries are intact... as all of mine have disappeared from my current contest... please let me know..thankxxx luv.. Linda-Marie..
Delacroix Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Very nice Haiku indeed. Enjoyed. Good luck on the contest. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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April 17, 2010 at 7:47 AM
Cool haiku, nice one. . .good luck on the contest. . .p.d.
Devonshire Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 7:47 AM
Super title, Janette! That's what we are, specks "in the universe." Excellent description of the photograph! Love, Carolyn
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