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LIND30RHYME
Created by Robert Lindley. Four lines whose total number of syllables adds up to 30 or a 7/7/7/9 verse, which is rhymed.        

         

As short days stretch, long nights shrink, Sol hangs higher in the sky. And the haunting, honking cry of wild guess, push Winter to the brink. Robin redbreasts are the first to vocalize signs of Spring. Unabashed, they sweetly sing as warm showers quench life's growing thirst. Beneath shrouds of frozen flakes, daffodils and crocus grow. And green grassy patches show, for a bit of warmth is all it takes. Sprouting shoots poke through the snow, piercing white with spears of green. And Spring arrives on the scene, releasing rivers to, once more flow.

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Date: 4/14/2022 5:34:00 AM
Verse three is my favorite. Congratulations, Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/14/2022 7:59:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/13/2022 9:43:00 PM
Great nature narration. Beautiful picture painted. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/14/2022 7:59:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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