Speaking Incorrectly

i told someone today that i liked it when it rained
i told them i liked that it made the world cold
and i told them that i liked how what was around us 
became desolate and drenched.
and i could of sworn i heard the words “that’s depressing”
slip her quiet lips as we were walking
and it only made me wonder,
why do we take a habit of classifying things in a completely incorrect manner?
most of us have no idea what our words mean
we try to sound sophisticated to impress our parents and their friends
and in the process we stumble on what we say
and we ruin it for everyone.
it’s so hard to wrap my head around the fact that today
it’s become normal to criticize others
for what makes us real,
and for what makes us more than flesh and bone.
whether it’s our sexuality or our mental state,
there’s always a person who needs to beat you for it
and today society is actually convinced that it’s sociably sound
to put others down only so they can build themselves
up into a skyscraper above the one’s they’ve broken
and then there’s others
who are criticized by the mean girls in our grade
whether we try to fit in or stand out
we’ll always be targets for the animals
and we’ll always be searching for a place 
that accepts those who enjoy the rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 9:50 AM
As per a new poet here, I decided to go for your best poems and I must say that this one left me flabbergasted! You are a gem, a star and a potential mega duper souper! Keep on writing friend and you are highly welcome to PS... A definite 7
Jung Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 7:33 PM
"I liked that it made the world cold" - that's a beautiful and memorable phrase.
Henderson Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Well spoken and not in vain. Peace and many blessings to you Emma.
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