Speak To Me In Whispers

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Speak to me in Whispers

My weakness is magnetic
Attracted to the metal in your spine
My creative spark
Ignited by the fire in your mind
The hunger I have for learning
Is fed with the manna you bestow
The vessel of my longing
Is bound to the ore that you row
So speak to me in whispers
Never let the volume rise above
The soft sweetness that's between us
To break the fragile bubble of our love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 5/4/2024 1:33:00 PM
Seductive and enticing write Crystol. I'd write to you in whispers but...
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/4/2024 3:23:00 PM
... words create their own volume? Tehee thank you Tom xo
Date: 5/4/2024 11:55:00 AM
Dear Crystol, What a delicate dance of intimacy and vulnerability, weaving together words that deeply touch the heart. I love your words of love's tender embrace, reminding us of the power of quiet connection. Blessings on your poetic journey, Daniel.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/4/2024 12:02:00 PM
"The power of quiet connection"...BRILLIANT!!! I so enjoy receiving your comments Daniel, thank you ever so much! Xo,-C
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