Speak Not To Me

Speak not to me of love, I cannot bear to hear
The fervent pleas you stoop to whisper in my ear
Speak not to me proclaiming staunch fidelity
Or how you will adore me through eternity

Speak not of how your love is stronger now by far
Than what it was before, so I must lift the bar
Speak not in vows regarding purity 
Of how you swear to worship me, and only me

I've heard confessions of this sort quite oft before,
No proof are they of love, I'll show you now the door
My heart has bled enough, I want the pain to end
Our love has run its course, why must I now pretend

While you were loving her, he started loving me
My broken heart he healed and showed me ecstasy
The shroud of pain you gave, he turned to joyous gown
My head with kisses wreathed and gifted me a crown

His ravished all the places unbeknownst to you
Each fantasy he played, each dream he made come true
His tongue, it sweetly roamed to each delicious place
Our bodies fused in rhythm, lost to time and place 

Speak not of sad regrets and turning back in time
Of seeking to recapture love that was sublime
Each night he speaks to me in passion's lovely rhyme
With heart and soul I speak and tell him he is mine!

For Georgio V's Iambic III Contest
This is written in Iambic hexameter
October 6, 2014
Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/23/2014 5:55:00 PM
I read a mention of this beautiful poem on another page...had to come read it and so glad I did tonight. It's stunning, passionate, emotive and the best part - a happy ending! Nothing better than that...the best revenge! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/8/2014 5:44:00 AM
Interesting write, congrats on the win, Jade
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Date: 11/7/2014 10:17:00 AM
You have indeed, "lifted the bar".....this is a wonderful poem !! Well done and congratulations on your win, !!!
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Date: 11/6/2014 9:15:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Jade.
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Date: 10/8/2014 1:39:00 AM
The moral of love and heart rescued by touch true is so passionately laid down in this poem of amazing metaphor and rhyme. "The shroud of pain you gave, he turned to joyous gown, my head with kisses wreathed, and gifted me a crown..." You are a woman deserving of the most physical and powerful love imaginable, this is a masterpiece Eileen...J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2014 4:47:00 AM
Your post has evoked strong emotion in me, Justin. That last sentence....Has me teary. Thank you ever so much for being so generous with your praise and commendation. It does my heart good. Feels much like a joyous gown....
Date: 10/7/2014 9:27:00 PM
I tell him he is mine.....in full of love.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2014 4:47:00 AM
:) Thank you, Muhammad. I appreciate the visit.
Date: 10/7/2014 9:52:00 AM
I like how your character ended up on top and the cheater was left behind. Terrific story telling and masterfully crafted. Good luck in the contest.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2014 4:49:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. It was a vengeful piece, I know....That is what is lovely about poetry. I can write whatever my heart feels impressed with and that's ok. I wanted to point out that neglect has dire consequences....Very dire consequences. Thank you for encouraging me. I hope it goes well in the contest. You know I don't join many. Hugs
Date: 10/7/2014 9:49:00 AM
Excellent expression of feeling of love in the way of life. Intelligently done. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2014 4:50:00 AM
Thanks BL....Intelligently done made me very happy. Hugs
Date: 10/7/2014 7:28:00 AM
I have a feeling Giorgio will place this high.I love love it!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2014 4:50:00 AM
Thanks for your visit to my poem, Charmaine. I love that you love this piece. Hugs
Date: 10/6/2014 7:45:00 PM
this sounds awesome Eileen. Good luck in the contest.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2014 4:51:00 AM
Brenda, so good to have you visit. Thanks for this lovely post. Hugs
Date: 10/6/2014 4:45:00 PM
Absolutely DIVINE write my friend - a 7 and faves - wow I hope you wow Giorgio as you have wowed me! Hugs Jan xxxxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2014 4:44:00 AM
I hope so, Jan. I do love writing in this form. It just seems to be the natural rhythm of my heart. Thanks for the lovely visit. Hugs
Date: 10/6/2014 4:22:00 PM
This is filled with emotions, passion and romance! Lovely work!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2014 4:43:00 AM
Thank you, Gry. I'm glad you find something to connect with in my work.
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