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Sparrows On the Telephone Wires

Telephone poles stretched 
Far apart from one another
The wires are full
With a flock of sparrows spread
Resting from their long journey

Copyright © Darlene De Beaulieu | Year Posted 2019

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Alkas Poetry Date: 6/14/2019 3:04:00 PM Normal perch telephone wires for the natural rest of living sparrows in the life of birds ... sensible observation my dear Darlene, have nice evening, kisses and hugs XXXXXXXOOOOOOO salute alkas Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/24/2019 1:12:00 PM Hello Alkas Poetry,you know from a distance they look like small close pecks. They are one of my favourite birds. Kisses and hugs Salute: xxxxxxx-oooooooo.

Paul Callus Date: 1/27/2019 8:05:00 AM You have painted such a vivid picture, Darlene. Our Maltese sparrows are lazy compared to these...they hate travelling far! Regards // paul Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/27/2019 10:55:00 AM hello Paul, thank you for the lovely comment.I guess they like the climate where you live. Have a nice day my friend.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/26/2019 8:40:00 PM this is charming. I can see them there! Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/27/2019 10:57:00 AM Hello Andrea, sparrows and the dove are my favourite birds. Thank you for the lovely comment, Have a nice day my friend.

Martin Brown Date: 1/25/2019 1:56:00 PM Very good Tanka, well composed. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/25/2019 5:54:00 PM Hello Martin, so nice to see you. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2019 2:36:00 AM - I see your beautiful picture of the birds resting, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/23/2019 8:46:00 AM Hello Sunshine Smile, how are you today? I hope all is well with you.Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Mike Gentile Date: 1/22/2019 2:37:00 PM I love your portrait of birds Darlene, Have a great evening xxoo Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/22/2019 3:29:00 PM Hello Mike ,I love the Sparrows and the Doves.They are my favourite birds. Have a nice day my friend. xxx-oooo.

Alfred Berggren Date: 1/22/2019 2:36:00 PM Hi Dar, Poor little birds. Must be awfull cold where you live. I hope they find shelter this night. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/22/2019 3:24:00 PM Hello Alfred, yes it is very cold here now. the squirrels and birds are not out, to feed. It is too cold for them.Tomorrow it will get a bit warmer. have a nice day my friend. thank you for the lovely comment.

Sherilynn Kucharek Date: 1/22/2019 2:01:00 PM Thank you, Darlene, for reading my poem. I have to agree, he forgot to give her the posey! Also, I look forward to reading yours! Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/22/2019 3:21:00 PM Hello Sherilynn Kucharek, you are welcomed.yes that is how I saw it to.Oh thank you. I look forward to reading your poetry to. have a nice dat my friwend.

Harry Horsman Date: 1/22/2019 5:03:00 AM love the poetry, so descriptive, yes seen your wonderful words, so many times... Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/22/2019 12:46:00 PM Hello Harry Horseman, thank you for the lovely comment.I also like your poetry Harry. have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina Date: 1/21/2019 6:33:00 PM Very Nice Darlene. I just hope they come round here a little sooner (lol) Nicely done! Have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/22/2019 12:48:00 PM Hello Charlie Messina, so nice to see you again. I think that these birds will come your way in time.Thank you for the lovely comment my friend.

M. L. Kiser Date: 1/21/2019 8:49:00 AM That's the way they do; they enjoy observing us humans. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/21/2019 1:44:00 PM Hello M.L.Kiser, so nicde to see yo. I hope all is well with you.Oh... I did not know they like to observe people. have a nice day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/20/2019 12:00:00 PM I see a great flock! A wonder! Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/21/2019 8:01:00 AM Hello Kim, these birds do not fly away for the winter. It amazes me that they do. I wonder how these birds find food and shelter. have a nice day my friend.

Timothy Mcguire Date: 1/19/2019 9:32:00 PM Resting on the conversations going from one phone to another. Great poem! Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/20/2019 7:53:00 AM Hello Timothy, I hope a;; is well with you today. yes you got it. I find they look like little clothes pegs on a clothes lone. Have a nice day my friend.

Gail Lewis Date: 1/19/2019 5:38:00 PM I love this Darlene a moment in time captured how lovely x Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/20/2019 7:56:00 AM Hello Gail,yes it is a moment in time caught when looking up to the telephone lines,to see these birds resting there. Have a nice day my friend. x

Caren Krutsinger Date: 1/19/2019 3:23:00 PM I have seen this, and you have given the imagery the credit it deserves, and the hopefulness the birds require, not even knowing it. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/19/2019 5:25:00 PM Hello Caren, so nice to hear from you. I see this often, and to me they look like tiny clothes pegs. Have a nice evening my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/19/2019 2:42:00 PM Wonderful imagery Darlene :) xomo Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/19/2019 5:26:00 PM Hello Maureen, thank you for the lovely comment my friend.You know, they do look like tiny clothes pins.

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/19/2019 2:06:00 PM greeat imagery of sparrows all lined up after migration, perhaps... good job, darlene... huggs Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/19/2019 5:36:00 PM Hello Nette, tiny sparrows do look lkike tiny clothes pins on a clothes line. Have a nice evening my friend.

Heidi Sands Date: 1/19/2019 1:23:00 PM You have written this so clearly to see it ! Well done Darlene :) Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/19/2019 5:38:00 PM Hello Heidi, I see it as I wrote it.They do look like tiny clothes pins on a clothes line. Have a nice evening my friend.