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Sparrows On the Telephone Wires

Telephone poles stretched Far apart from one another The wires are full With a flock of sparrows spread Resting from their long journey

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Alkas Poetry

Date: 6/14/2019 3:04:00 PM

Normal perch telephone wires for the natural rest of living sparrows in the life of birds ... sensible observation my dear Darlene, have nice evening, kisses and hugs XXXXXXXOOOOOOO salute alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/24/2019 1:12:00 PM

Hello Alkas Poetry,you know from a distance they look like small close pecks. They are one of my favourite birds. Kisses and hugs Salute: xxxxxxx-oooooooo.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/27/2019 8:05:00 AM

You have painted such a vivid picture, Darlene. Our Maltese sparrows are lazy compared to these...they hate travelling far! Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/27/2019 10:55:00 AM

hello Paul, thank you for the lovely comment.I guess they like the climate where you live. Have a nice day my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2019 8:40:00 PM

this is charming. I can see them there!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/27/2019 10:57:00 AM

Hello Andrea, sparrows and the dove are my favourite birds. Thank you for the lovely comment, Have a nice day my friend.

Martin Brown

Date: 1/25/2019 1:56:00 PM

Very good Tanka, well composed.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/25/2019 5:54:00 PM

Hello Martin, so nice to see you. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/23/2019 2:36:00 AM

- I see your beautiful picture of the birds resting, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/23/2019 8:46:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile, how are you today? I hope all is well with you.Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/22/2019 2:37:00 PM

I love your portrait of birds Darlene, Have a great evening xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/22/2019 3:29:00 PM

Hello Mike ,I love the Sparrows and the Doves.They are my favourite birds. Have a nice day my friend. xxx-oooo.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 1/22/2019 2:36:00 PM

Hi Dar, Poor little birds. Must be awfull cold where you live. I hope they find shelter this night.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/22/2019 3:24:00 PM

Hello Alfred, yes it is very cold here now. the squirrels and birds are not out, to feed. It is too cold for them.Tomorrow it will get a bit warmer. have a nice day my friend. thank you for the lovely comment.

Sherilynn Kucharek

Date: 1/22/2019 2:01:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene, for reading my poem. I have to agree, he forgot to give her the posey! Also, I look forward to reading yours!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/22/2019 3:21:00 PM

Hello Sherilynn Kucharek, you are welcomed.yes that is how I saw it to.Oh thank you. I look forward to reading your poetry to. have a nice dat my friwend.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/22/2019 5:03:00 AM

love the poetry, so descriptive, yes seen your wonderful words, so many times...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/22/2019 12:46:00 PM

Hello Harry Horseman, thank you for the lovely comment.I also like your poetry Harry. have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/21/2019 6:33:00 PM

Very Nice Darlene. I just hope they come round here a little sooner (lol) Nicely done! Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/22/2019 12:48:00 PM

Hello Charlie Messina, so nice to see you again. I think that these birds will come your way in time.Thank you for the lovely comment my friend.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/21/2019 8:49:00 AM

That's the way they do; they enjoy observing us humans.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/21/2019 1:44:00 PM

Hello M.L.Kiser, so nicde to see yo. I hope all is well with you.Oh... I did not know they like to observe people. have a nice day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/20/2019 12:00:00 PM

I see a great flock! A wonder!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/21/2019 8:01:00 AM

Hello Kim, these birds do not fly away for the winter. It amazes me that they do. I wonder how these birds find food and shelter. have a nice day my friend.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/19/2019 9:32:00 PM

Resting on the conversations going from one phone to another. Great poem!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2019 7:53:00 AM

Hello Timothy, I hope a;; is well with you today. yes you got it. I find they look like little clothes pegs on a clothes lone. Have a nice day my friend.

Gail Lewis

Date: 1/19/2019 5:38:00 PM

I love this Darlene a moment in time captured how lovely x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2019 7:56:00 AM

Hello Gail,yes it is a moment in time caught when looking up to the telephone lines,to see these birds resting there. Have a nice day my friend. x

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/19/2019 3:23:00 PM

I have seen this, and you have given the imagery the credit it deserves, and the hopefulness the birds require, not even knowing it.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/19/2019 5:25:00 PM

Hello Caren, so nice to hear from you. I see this often, and to me they look like tiny clothes pegs. Have a nice evening my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 1/19/2019 2:42:00 PM

Wonderful imagery Darlene :) xomo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/19/2019 5:26:00 PM

Hello Maureen, thank you for the lovely comment my friend.You know, they do look like tiny clothes pins.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/19/2019 2:06:00 PM

greeat imagery of sparrows all lined up after migration, perhaps... good job, darlene... huggs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/19/2019 5:36:00 PM

Hello Nette, tiny sparrows do look lkike tiny clothes pins on a clothes line. Have a nice evening my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/19/2019 1:23:00 PM

You have written this so clearly to see it ! Well done Darlene :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/19/2019 5:38:00 PM

Hello Heidi, I see it as I wrote it.They do look like tiny clothes pins on a clothes line. Have a nice evening my friend.