Sparrows

Thirsty blue sparrows 
In pursuit of sunny touch 
Of your silken leaves
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16/12/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Murray Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Lovely.
Gupta Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Thank you ..
Daniel Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 12:35 AM
Deep haiku, Probir:)
Gupta Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Thank you ...
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 11:45 PM
At the risk of sounding ignorant, can you elaborate? This is just too deep for me! But I enjoyed its poetic touch.
Gupta Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Literally and factually speaking, this morning, I saw some sparrows almost shivering in winter while seeking some foliage for a little heat ... this I picked up and utilized here absolutely symbolically in imagery ... obviously it expresses a plurality of meaning depending upon a reader's attitude ... from sensual to spiritual with other shades in between ...
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