Sparrows

Thirsty blue sparrows In pursuit of sunny touch Of your silken leaves __________________________________ 16/12/2016

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Jean Murray

Date: 12/16/2016 1:14:00 PM

Lovely.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/16/2016 5:26:00 PM

Thank you ..

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/16/2016 12:35:00 AM

Deep haiku, Probir:)

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/16/2016 8:13:00 AM

Thank you ...

White Wolf

Date: 12/15/2016 11:45:00 PM

At the risk of sounding ignorant, can you elaborate? This is just too deep for me! But I enjoyed its poetic touch.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/16/2016 8:19:00 AM

Literally and factually speaking, this morning, I saw some sparrows almost shivering in winter while seeking some foliage for a little heat ... this I picked up and utilized here absolutely symbolically in imagery ... obviously it expresses a plurality of meaning depending upon a reader's attitude ... from sensual to spiritual with other shades in between ...