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Sparrows

sparrows pause in spring
walden pond on cabin's peak -
no epiphany

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2014

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March 17, 2014 at 9:15 PM

Hopefully, spring will be arriving soon. But, for those of us who live up north, it felt like winter had returned these last few days. A great haiku, Dave! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you very much for the kind comments on my poem! :)

March 16, 2014 at 5:00 AM

Wonderful poem penned well and congrats on the win, dave

March 16, 2014 at 4:17 AM

Hi Dave:) Awesome win.... Take care Love *Skat

Poet Destroyer A

March 16, 2014 at 4:00 AM

Dave, Congratulations! Thank you for the support ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2014 at 10:07 PM

I like that cool final line!!

February 19, 2014 at 7:45 AM

Thanks Andrea :)

February 18, 2014 at 7:18 PM

You made good use out of only seventeen syllables here.

February 18, 2014 at 7:41 PM

Thanks robert - By the way, nice job on "Miss Simara" - I got spammed by her also :)

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