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Sparrow On Fire

There once was a Sparrow name Fred Who wished to be a Robin instead? His dull feathers of brown Were, making him frown He pined for a breast of bright red.

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Date: 3/22/2023 4:11:00 PM
Cute limerick, Shirley: Made me smile. SuZ
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Date: 2/23/2023 1:51:00 AM
Such a sweet limerick Shirley! Debx
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 2/23/2023 1:57:00 AM
Thank you, DebX
Date: 2/22/2023 11:07:00 PM
Lovely limerick. The grass on the other side is greener :)
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 2/23/2023 1:58:00 AM
Thank you, Victor
Date: 2/22/2023 6:35:00 PM
Cute! That bird wonders if someone can rob him a cent(er) two.
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 2/23/2023 1:58:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon
Date: 2/22/2023 6:33:00 PM
Fred fell in love with a Robin Redbreast - He asked her if she'd like to share his nest - She went off bob bobbin - Sparrow Fred was sobbing - And couldn't remove the red paint off his chest……… Belle
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 2/23/2023 2:01:00 AM
Ha Ha! That's a beauty, Belle Thank you for your clever comment. Take care, Shirley
Date: 2/22/2023 5:29:00 PM
Great limerick, Shirley. Fun to write and more fun to read:)
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 2/23/2023 2:01:00 AM
AW! Thank you, Daniel
Date: 2/22/2023 5:21:00 PM
Lovely limerick!
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 2/23/2023 2:02:00 AM
Lovely comment, Aysha. Thank you

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