Sparrow

Miniscule sparrow
in the middle of the road.
Mini hops, maxi danger.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 10:21 AM
VEry good, Nola! It's almost like a senryu or something. DAver told me to read your stuff. I think I may have a long time ago here. Let me see one more poem. Luv, Andrea
Austin Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 2:00 PM
OOPS. Now I see that I commented on the Siamese kitty poem before. Anywho. Good to see your name in the soup. How about treating us to some more fine poetry. Love, Dave
Austin Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Hi, Nola. Hope you are having a good spring awakening. I'm still trying to do a good editing job on one of my books. It will take time. A little sparrow told me I should say hello. Love, daver
Brown Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 7:09 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Nola. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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