Sparrow

Miniscule sparrow in the middle of the road. Mini hops, maxi danger.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2010 10:21:00 AM

VEry good, Nola! It's almost like a senryu or something. DAver told me to read your stuff. I think I may have a long time ago here. Let me see one more poem. Luv, Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 5/28/2010 2:00:00 PM

OOPS. Now I see that I commented on the Siamese kitty poem before. Anywho. Good to see your name in the soup. How about treating us to some more fine poetry. Love, Dave

Daver Austin

Date: 4/16/2010 7:40:00 AM

Hi, Nola. Hope you are having a good spring awakening. I'm still trying to do a good editing job on one of my books. It will take time. A little sparrow told me I should say hello. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/29/2010 7:09:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Nola. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol