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Sparrow

I’m a familiar bird with little shape, Cute and brown with a lot of pep There is nothing about me to swank I’m simple just how you think Neither have graceful plumes, Nor blessed with mellifluous booms But I’m the most sociable one A symbol of joy and protection I’m an icon of hard work And believe in team work May be insignificant by stature, Withstand every climate nature Bathe in sand and water alike, Sing in groups is what I like Despite thrown into Red Book alerts, I serve my best to save you from pests. I am your little sparrow. I am a Bird - Personification Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Date: 27/07/2020 placed : 3rd.

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V. Deepa

Date: 8/3/2020 4:36:00 AM

Wow I love little sparrows very much.Nowadays can't find many due to spectrum radiation.:-( Lovely poem.Well expressed.Yes you are a icon of hard work:-) Congratulations on your win:-) Keep writing and keep inspiring.Take care. Warm regards~Deepa:-)

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 8/3/2020 7:10:00 PM

Thanks a lot for your compliments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2020 2:58:00 PM

So glad you won in the contest. Congrats. It was well deserved.

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 8/2/2020 11:10:00 PM

Thanks for the compliments.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/2/2020 4:25:00 AM

Sparrows are such delightful birds. I love when they chirp though they are receding in numbers now. Your muse comes as a refreshing breath of tunes by little sparrows. Congratulations on your win!

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 8/2/2020 11:09:00 PM

Thanks for the compliments.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/1/2020 1:02:00 PM

Patri, congratulations on your winning placement with this sweet poem!

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 8/1/2020 10:11:00 PM

Very glad to receive your compliments. Thanks a lot.

Mitali Saikia

Date: 7/28/2020 11:11:00 PM

As I read your poem, I hear little sparrows chirping on my patio.. they are my sweet companion morning and evenings .. lovely tribute to this breed of beautiful birds ..! Much love !

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/29/2020 7:57:00 PM

Thanks a lot!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2020 5:42:00 PM

I see you as a very humble person from reading this poem, a hard worker with good ethics. I chose the parrot. what does that say about ME? hahaha. (I want to just hang out with friends in the jungle!)

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/29/2020 7:57:00 PM

very glad to receive compliments. Thanks a lot!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/28/2020 1:38:00 PM

So t’weet!

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/29/2020 7:54:00 PM

Thanks a lot!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/28/2020 12:05:00 PM

what a sweet tribute to the sparrow i often get them on my border having a 'bath' in the dry earth:-) hugs Jan xx

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/29/2020 7:54:00 PM

Thanks a lot !

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/28/2020 7:42:00 AM

This is darling Patri! I do enjoy my sparrows. They depend on me for their fresh bird bath all summer, and my husky’s shedding every spring to make their nests cozy. My best to you in the contest! xomo

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/29/2020 7:53:00 PM

Thanks a lot!