Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Personification

Sparrow

I’m a familiar bird with little shape,
Cute and brown with a lot of pep
There is nothing about me to swank 
I’m simple just how you think
Neither have graceful plumes, 
Nor blessed with mellifluous booms
But I’m the most sociable one
A symbol of joy and protection
I’m an icon of hard work 
And believe in team work
May be insignificant by stature,
Withstand every climate nature
Bathe in sand and water alike,
Sing in groups is what I like
Despite thrown into Red Book alerts, 
I serve my best to save you from pests. 
I am your little sparrow. 

I am a Bird - Personification Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 
Date: 27/07/2020
placed : 3rd.

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V. Deepa August 3, 2020 at 4:36 AM Wow I love little sparrows very much.Nowadays can't find many due to spectrum radiation.:-( Lovely poem.Well expressed.Yes you are a icon of hard work:-) Congratulations on your win:-) Keep writing and keep inspiring.Take care. Warm regards~Deepa:-) Patri Venkata Ramana August 3, 2020 at 7:10 PM Thanks a lot for your compliments.

Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2020 at 2:58 PM So glad you won in the contest. Congrats. It was well deserved. Patri Venkata Ramana August 2, 2020 at 11:10 PM Thanks for the compliments.

Aditi Mishra August 2, 2020 at 4:25 AM Sparrows are such delightful birds. I love when they chirp though they are receding in numbers now. Your muse comes as a refreshing breath of tunes by little sparrows. Congratulations on your win! Patri Venkata Ramana August 2, 2020 at 11:09 PM Thanks for the compliments.

Tania Kitchin August 1, 2020 at 1:02 PM Patri, congratulations on your winning placement with this sweet poem! Patri Venkata Ramana August 1, 2020 at 10:11 PM Very glad to receive your compliments. Thanks a lot.

Mitali Saikia July 28, 2020 at 11:11 PM As I read your poem, I hear little sparrows chirping on my patio.. they are my sweet companion morning and evenings .. lovely tribute to this breed of beautiful birds ..! Much love ! Patri Venkata Ramana July 29, 2020 at 7:57 PM Thanks a lot!

Andrea Dietrich July 28, 2020 at 5:42 PM I see you as a very humble person from reading this poem, a hard worker with good ethics. I chose the parrot. what does that say about ME? hahaha. (I want to just hang out with friends in the jungle!) Patri Venkata Ramana July 29, 2020 at 7:57 PM very glad to receive compliments. Thanks a lot!

Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2020 at 1:38 PM So t’weet! Patri Venkata Ramana July 29, 2020 at 7:54 PM Thanks a lot!

Jan Allison July 28, 2020 at 12:05 PM what a sweet tribute to the sparrow i often get them on my border having a 'bath' in the dry earth:-) hugs Jan xx Patri Venkata Ramana July 29, 2020 at 7:54 PM Thanks a lot !

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 28, 2020 at 7:42 AM This is darling Patri! I do enjoy my sparrows. They depend on me for their fresh bird bath all summer, and my husky’s shedding every spring to make their nests cozy. My best to you in the contest! xomo Patri Venkata Ramana July 29, 2020 at 7:53 PM Thanks a lot!