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Sparrow

I’m a familiar bird with little shape,
Cute and brown with a lot of pep
There is nothing about me to swank 
I’m simple just how you think
Neither have graceful plumes, 
Nor blessed with mellifluous booms
But I’m the most sociable one
A symbol of joy and protection
I’m an icon of hard work 
And believe in team work
May be insignificant by stature,
Withstand every climate nature
Bathe in sand and water alike,
Sing in groups is what I like
Despite thrown into Red Book alerts, 
I serve my best to save you from pests. 
I am your little sparrow. 

I am a Bird - Personification Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 
Date: 27/07/2020
placed : 3rd.

Copyright © Patri Venkata Ramana | Year Posted 2020

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V. Deepa Date: 8/3/2020 4:36:00 AM Wow I love little sparrows very much.Nowadays can't find many due to spectrum radiation.:-( Lovely poem.Well expressed.Yes you are a icon of hard work:-) Congratulations on your win:-) Keep writing and keep inspiring.Take care. Warm regards~Deepa:-) Login to Reply Patri Venkata Ramana Date: 8/3/2020 7:10:00 PM Thanks a lot for your compliments.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/2/2020 2:58:00 PM So glad you won in the contest. Congrats. It was well deserved. Login to Reply Patri Venkata Ramana Date: 8/2/2020 11:10:00 PM Thanks for the compliments.

Aditi Mishra Date: 8/2/2020 4:25:00 AM Sparrows are such delightful birds. I love when they chirp though they are receding in numbers now. Your muse comes as a refreshing breath of tunes by little sparrows. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Patri Venkata Ramana Date: 8/2/2020 11:09:00 PM Thanks for the compliments.

Tania Kitchin Date: 8/1/2020 1:02:00 PM Patri, congratulations on your winning placement with this sweet poem! Login to Reply Patri Venkata Ramana Date: 8/1/2020 10:11:00 PM Very glad to receive your compliments. Thanks a lot.

Mitali Saikia Date: 7/28/2020 11:11:00 PM As I read your poem, I hear little sparrows chirping on my patio.. they are my sweet companion morning and evenings .. lovely tribute to this breed of beautiful birds ..! Much love ! Login to Reply Patri Venkata Ramana Date: 7/29/2020 7:57:00 PM Thanks a lot!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/28/2020 5:42:00 PM I see you as a very humble person from reading this poem, a hard worker with good ethics. I chose the parrot. what does that say about ME? hahaha. (I want to just hang out with friends in the jungle!) Login to Reply Patri Venkata Ramana Date: 7/29/2020 7:57:00 PM very glad to receive compliments. Thanks a lot!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/28/2020 1:38:00 PM So t’weet! Login to Reply Patri Venkata Ramana Date: 7/29/2020 7:54:00 PM Thanks a lot!

Jan Allison Date: 7/28/2020 12:05:00 PM what a sweet tribute to the sparrow i often get them on my border having a 'bath' in the dry earth:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Patri Venkata Ramana Date: 7/29/2020 7:54:00 PM Thanks a lot !

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/28/2020 7:42:00 AM This is darling Patri! I do enjoy my sparrows. They depend on me for their fresh bird bath all summer, and my husky’s shedding every spring to make their nests cozy. My best to you in the contest! xomo Login to Reply Patri Venkata Ramana Date: 7/29/2020 7:53:00 PM Thanks a lot!