Dinda Minardi Poet Alliteration

Sparkling Slime

(02/10/2011)
Sleek sealed slime slipped in slacked sheer
Seems sparkling on stomped stamp scheme

Ditty responses:
I got two of my sisters read it loudly... They couldn't manage it well... Well maybe because it's not our first language, but yeah, They tried really hard. :)

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Sara Kendrick January 19, 2012 at 1:31 PM Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work..Sara

Black Eyed Susan October 2, 2011 at 7:13 PM i hope this does well in the contest. it would be very hard for someone w/a lisp to read this! Dinda Minardi October 3, 2011 at 1:36 AM thanks dear, Susan. :)